Question

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（1）It's a story happened five years ago.Li Hua,who lived in the city ,came to visit her uncle in our village.She and I became good friend.One day,I went to her uncle's to do homework with her. But she wasn't in.I found beautiful clock on her bed. I became very curiously and took it to have a look.Since I have never seen a clock before,I touched it here and there .But suddenly, I found the clock was't working. I felt worrying and wanted to run .But i didn't .Later that day ,Itold Li Hua had broken her clock. She smiled,said her little cousin had dropped it ontu the ground this moring and it had stopped working since then.
(2)I like spring very much.Spring is a pleasantly season.Birds sing around us ,the air is fresh,and there are flower everywhere .Today,Dad,Mom and i went into Qingdao Park and had a picnic there.There were also other families enjoy their picnics.Everybody there was in a bad mood.Children were running and laughing,and parents were running them.Some young couples are taking photos on the boats in the lake. Several little girls were dancing under a big peach free. i like spending the time with my parents . I hope I can go with Dad and Mom again quite soon.
(3)In three days, our school will have summer camp and I will be going to it. Well, I have to say that I'm not good at English and that's the reason why i had the chance to take part in this camp.Confused?Let me explaining it to you.Some American students will come and join us.They want learn anything about Chinese culture.Some students from our school who is very good at English will communicate with them at the camp.Some students who don't do good in. English will also have the chance to talk about them.I'm one of the latter .Now do you konw how i can go to the camp?

Answer 1

（1）It's a story (happening) five years ago.Li Hua,who lived in the city,came to visit her uncle in our village.She and I became good (friends).One day,I went to her uncle's to do homework with her.But she wasn't in.I found (加入a) beautiful clock on her bed.I became very (curious) and took it to have a look.Since I (had) never seen a clock before,I touched it here and there.But suddenly,I found the clock wasn't working.I felt (worried) and wanted to run.But I didn't.Later that day,I told Li Hua (加入I) had broken her clock.She smiled,(saying) her little cousin had dropped it (on) the ground this morning and it had stopped working since then.
(2)I like spring very much.Spring is a (pleasant) season.Birds sing around us,the air is fresh,and there are (flowers) everywhere.Today,Dad,Mom and I went (to) Qingdao Park and had a picnic there.There were also other families (enjoying) their picnics.Everybody there was in a (good) mood.Children were running and laughing,and parents were running (after) them.Some young couples (were) taking photos on the boats in the lake.Several little girls were dancing under a big peach tree.I like spending (去掉the) time with my parents.I hope I can go (加入there) with Dad and Mom again quite soon.
(3)In three days,our school will have (加入a) summer camp and I will be going to it.Well,I have to say that I'm not good at English and that's the reason why I (have) the chance to take part in this camp.Confused?Let me (explain) it to you.Some American students will come and join us.They want (加入to) learn (something) about Chinese culture.Some students from our school who (are) very good at English will communicate with them at the camp.Some students who don't do (well) in English will also have the chance to talk (with) them.I'm one of the latter.Now do you konw (why) I can go to the camp?