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My Dreaming Place to Go for a Vacation
I have a dream that I can go sightseeing in Paris.
Paris is a beautiful city and has a long Art History. The buildings are pretty good. The people are so friendly ,too. As a Art lover. We should go there to enjoy the views and music.
When the National Day is coming. I am flying there with my parents or friend. I am buying some fantastic pictures and taking some pictures of the buildings there, like Notre Dame and Eiffel Tower .And I’m going to the Louvre to see the famous things, too. In the afternoon. I am drawing pictures in the Nature Park. And we’re having a picnic there and going fishing near a beautiful small lake.Oh! I'd love to stay there forever!
I think I can have a good time in Paris in the future. 展开
I have a dream that I can go sightseeing in Paris.
Paris is a beautiful city and has a long Art History. The buildings are pretty good. The people are so friendly ,too. As a Art lover. We should go there to enjoy the views and music.
When the National Day is coming. I am flying there with my parents or friend. I am buying some fantastic pictures and taking some pictures of the buildings there, like Notre Dame and Eiffel Tower .And I’m going to the Louvre to see the famous things, too. In the afternoon. I am drawing pictures in the Nature Park. And we’re having a picnic there and going fishing near a beautiful small lake.Oh! I'd love to stay there forever!
I think I can have a good time in Paris in the future. 展开
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1.As an lover 2.I will buy some fantastic pictures and take some pictures of the buildings there 3.famous objects,too
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