Question

英语翻译，高手请进

世界从一片秋叶开始
带着熹微的黎明小舟，划过氤氲的时光长河
时间从光的起点开始
推着搁浅的黎明小舟，漂过无声的静谧黄昏

你泼墨了墙角残存的气息，（于是）渲染了一个没有跌宕的夏天
你看见了第一个破啼的夏天，你看见了东方破晓另一个心愿
当第一缕阳光与叶脉纹路交汇时，最后一丝氤氲消逝在阳光下
我们的梦想，逐渐变老

我愿与你回到时光的起点，一起捕捉光源跃动的身影
你经过（路过）一段缠绵的古老童谣，你摘落了一片将欲下落的叶子
为了奠祭过往与已逝去的时光，以及日后对它纪念与凭吊
我们的梦想，逐渐变老

时间会将你我的一切改写，变成了沙，变成一条流动的河
彼此的呼吸划过清晨的脸颊，灼热的起伏酝酿下一日的相遇
抵达不到世界的尽头，便会化为微笑
永远有多远，时间会告诉我们

世界从一片秋叶开始
带着熹微的黎明小舟，划过氤氲的时光长河
时间从光的起点开始
推着搁浅的黎明小舟，漂过无声的静谧黄昏
快快~~~我即用~~ 不要网站翻译，我要写歌，所以翻译的尽量诗意点漂亮点。

Answer 1

本来路过飘过，但是忍不住说两句：

像这类创作性工作，楼主你想找免费翻译也太简单了吧？你写歌还有版权，如果网友在这里回答，甚至连个名字都没有。你不是在鼓励盗版、鼓励不尊重知识？难道大家学了英文是来这里免费奉献的？

我相信大家是想互相帮助互相提高，授人以渔而不是授人以鱼，楼主这样做是直接取鱼！而且还很有架子地催促。

当然也会有人回答，周瑜打黄盖，愿打愿挨谁也没话说。但是英文版权问题确实存在。可是另一个方面，这样匆匆答出来的结果，是不是有质量？如果没有质量而楼主能够采用那是不是说明楼主并不是很敬业地写歌？从事艺术创作最基本的原则就是要诚实、真实、精益求精。

我写这个回答肯定是不会被采纳，所以只会降低我的答案被采纳率。但是忍不住，所以说几句。路过的朋友不妨看个热闹。

类似的例子还有很多。我建议广大网友，对于不是普及性知识、不是为了学习技能和提高能力、而只是为了直接索取别人的劳动成果的问题不予回答。

Answer 2

这个要收钱的。。

Answer 3

The world from a akiha began
With the dawn of the morning, dense narrow across the river of time
From the beginning of the light
Push the boat stranded at dawn, a silent and quiet evening

The corner of your splash-ink remaining, (so) rendering the ups and downs of the summer
Did you see the first one to break the crow of summer, you see the dawn another dream
When the first sunshine and leaf texture, and finally a present dense dies in the sunlight
Our dreams, gradually become old

I wish you back to the starting point and time, the light of the living together capture
You pass through (a), you old nursery rhymes of touching the pick of the leaves to fall to
For the drink offering already lost time past and future, and in its memory and thinking
Our dreams, gradually become old

Time will you all my rewrite, become the sand, become a flowing rivers
Each morning the cheek, breathing through the ups and downs next day scorching brewing
Arrived at the end of the world, not will smile
Always have how far, time will tell us

The world from a akiha began
With the dawn of the morning, dense narrow across the river of time
From the beginning of the light
Push the boat stranded at dawn, a silent and quiet evening.

Answer 4

The world is equipped with the dim small auroral boat starting from when autumn a sheet of is harmonious , is streaking dense days long river time begins to be pushing the stranded small auroral boat from the starting point glorifying, failed too silent quiet dusk Your splash-ink ink-painting remnant breath of corner, you have seen summer having exaggerated one (thereupon) not having flowing rhythm the first have broken summer crowing , you have seen that another wish pawns first wisp of sunlight and vein dawn breaks when the grain relationship converges, final thread of dense the fond dream dying away going to us in sunlight , gradually changeable old people My wish and your starting point returning to days, catch an illuminant together jumping over the person's silhouette moving your process (go by) segment of lingering antiquity children's rhyme, you have plucked an assured source of life once slicing the leaf will be just going to drop in order to establish hold a memorial ceremony for associate with the days already having passed away , dream of , be changed into gradually an old people as well as in the future face to face, it commemorates and pays a visit to our That time is able to rewrite your and I all, has become a sand , the breath becoming a mobile river both parties has streaked the dawn cheek , the ups and downs broiling has brewed meeting each other going down 1st arriving in the end less than the world, how distant be the convenient meeting Hua Wei smile forever , time is able to tell us The world is equipped with the dim small auroral boat starting from when autumn a sheet of is harmonious , is streaking dense days long river time begins to be pushing the stranded small auroral boat from the starting point glorifying, failed too silent quiet dusk