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WelltodayIwillgiveyouashortpresentationaboutwhyyoushouldchoicemeFirstofallmypronuncia...
Well today I will give you a short presentation about why you should choice me
First of all my pronunciation is pretty good., even though I haven’t reach the level of talking
On and on without enough preparation ,but I think a flow of words is no proof of wisdom. Even he is the top speaker ,he has to make enough preparation. Now we still have more than 40 day to make preparation that’s enough for me. What’s more it’s really hard to form a beautiful pronunciation within a few days. How important a beautiful pronunciation is for a speech !it’s my biggest advantage.
Secondly I am a girl full of explosive power . I’m good at flattening opponent who is far stronger than me . 九八年重庆发生特大水，那时我还是一年级的小学生，老师给了我一篇长达4页的稿子，只有三天的准备时间，由于我的认真和勤奋，最后我还是取得了六个年纪的第一名。初二时，我还曾参加县里的演讲比赛，同样打败了，同龄以及高中组学播音主持的选手。所以我是个潜力巨大的选手
Thirdly I want to share some experience about giving speech . there are always a big crow of people feel too nervous to give a speech. If I must find out I reason that can make me nervous that must belong to I don’t make enough preparation. 而我的人生信条是，永远不打没有准备的仗
我就是这样一个有着漂亮发音和巨大潜力的女孩，我干事认真，总是能出色地完成被给予的任务。If you give me a chance I will give you a surprise. 展开
First of all my pronunciation is pretty good., even though I haven’t reach the level of talking
On and on without enough preparation ,but I think a flow of words is no proof of wisdom. Even he is the top speaker ,he has to make enough preparation. Now we still have more than 40 day to make preparation that’s enough for me. What’s more it’s really hard to form a beautiful pronunciation within a few days. How important a beautiful pronunciation is for a speech !it’s my biggest advantage.
Secondly I am a girl full of explosive power . I’m good at flattening opponent who is far stronger than me . 九八年重庆发生特大水，那时我还是一年级的小学生，老师给了我一篇长达4页的稿子，只有三天的准备时间，由于我的认真和勤奋，最后我还是取得了六个年纪的第一名。初二时，我还曾参加县里的演讲比赛，同样打败了，同龄以及高中组学播音主持的选手。所以我是个潜力巨大的选手
Thirdly I want to share some experience about giving speech . there are always a big crow of people feel too nervous to give a speech. If I must find out I reason that can make me nervous that must belong to I don’t make enough preparation. 而我的人生信条是，永远不打没有准备的仗
我就是这样一个有着漂亮发音和巨大潜力的女孩，我干事认真，总是能出色地完成被给予的任务。If you give me a chance I will give you a surprise. 展开
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九八年重庆发生特大水，那时我还是一年级的小学生，老师给了我一篇长达4页的稿子，只有三天的准备时间，由于我的认真和勤奋，最后我还是取得了六个年纪的第一名。初二时，我还曾参加县里的演讲比赛，同样打败了，同龄以及高中组学播音主持的选手。所以我是个潜力巨大的选手
A major flood happened in Chong Qing in 1998, at that time I was a first year primary school student, my teacher gave me a four page script and three days time to prepare for a presentation, I finally became the champion in all six grades due to my earnest and diligency. In year 8, I participated a speech competition in my county, I defeated all the contestants including my peers and high school students, therefore, I am a contestant with huge potential.
而我的人生信条是，永远不打没有准备的仗
My belief is "Never do anything without preparation"
我就是这样一个有着漂亮发音和巨大潜力的女孩，我干事认真，总是能出色地完成被给予的任务。
I'm a girl with such beautiful voices and huge potential, I always do my work with earnest attitude, and eventually complete the task with outstanding performance
A major flood happened in Chong Qing in 1998, at that time I was a first year primary school student, my teacher gave me a four page script and three days time to prepare for a presentation, I finally became the champion in all six grades due to my earnest and diligency. In year 8, I participated a speech competition in my county, I defeated all the contestants including my peers and high school students, therefore, I am a contestant with huge potential.
而我的人生信条是，永远不打没有准备的仗
My belief is "Never do anything without preparation"
我就是这样一个有着漂亮发音和巨大潜力的女孩，我干事认真，总是能出色地完成被给予的任务。
I'm a girl with such beautiful voices and huge potential, I always do my work with earnest attitude, and eventually complete the task with outstanding performance
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