Question

我写了一篇英语作文，若按中考18分评分的话，可以得几分？还有，帮我修改一下全文好吗？非常感谢你！

My Family Rules
As we all know, a nation has it's rule and a family also has one. In my home, I have a lot of rules. For example, playing the piano everday, do the home work more than2 hours. So I get tired of the family rules. I want to tell my parents some suggestions. If you would like me to be a good boy, you needn't give me a lot of rules and I'll do myself. Because I'm growing up.

Answer 1

如果中考按18分算的话，本篇短文的得分12分。原因在于：
1.字数太少，只有79个
2.用词不当：如in my home（应该改为：in my family; some suggestions是复数形式，然而内容方面只有一点；而且suggestion用在这里不太合适应该为my opinion）
3.文中错误：it's应该为its； do 应该为doingthe home work more than2 hours,而且本句表达不符合英语习惯； everday应该为every day
4.语言表达不够美

My Family Rules
As we all know, a nation has its rule and so does a family. In my home, I have a lot of rules.Such as, playing the piano every day, spending more than 2 hours doing the homework ,which really make me feel tired. After all, we students should be allowed to do what they like to sometimes. I want to tell my parents my opinion. If you would like me to be a good boy, it's better not to give me so many rules and I'll do it myself. Because I'm growing up.

Answer 2

还可以 虽然有的地方用的不是很恰当 中考18分的话 我改卷给你14分左右 呵呵 我以后就是个老师

Answer 3

15分有的

Answer 4

嗯，小同学，我是高中的老师，我觉得你不应该到网上来寻找答案，但我还是给你评个分吧，我就给你评16分吧，写的不错，至于意见嘛，我就不说了

Answer 5

第一，字数严重不全。要求写60词，至少写90词；要求80词至少120词。老师不会细数。写多点不会扣分，少了就会很惨。我数了，你的也就8、90词，不够的。

第二，语言没有水平，太幼稚，小学生都写得出来，没有亮点。

第三，凡是写校规、家规等规则，都属于开中药铺，列干点（就是1.……2.……3.……），多规则、少评论。

如果喊我们老师来评分的话。18分你可以得到8分，最多了...

Answer 6

你可得13-15分左右

第一行it's rule 应该改为its rules 而后面的one改成them
第二行playing the piano everday, do the home work more than2 hours 应该改为 I play the piano every day and do the homework for more than 2 hours
第三行of改为for
最后一行do myself 改为do all by myself