Question

我写了一篇英语作文，帮我修改一下好吗？ 非常感谢你！

My Grandpa's Hobby
My grandpa lives alone, but he doesn't think lonely. Because he has many hobbies. Such us playing basketball, watering the flowers, listening the music and so on. In the early morning, he usually plays basketball in the club in order to keep fit. At night, he opens the computer to watch news and chatting with his friends. I think his hobbies are very useful and exciting. I'll support you forever.

Answer 1

你写的不只一个兴趣,所以标题是My Grandpa's Hobbies
but he doesn't think lonely.=but he doesn't feel lonely.
think=想,feel=觉得/感到
Such us=Such as
Such as=例如
watering the flowers=watering plants
the flowers是指定的花 ,我想你的意思是园艺吧,所以watering plants是比较好的
listening the music=listening to music
opens the computer to watch news=switch on the computer for watching news
I'll support you forever=I'll support him forever.

Answer 2

二排的us应该改成we
listening the music 改为listening to the music