Question

【高分求翻译】【英语自我介绍】【中译英|话不多】

好心人 带我看看哪些地方需要修改的
比如语法什么的。免机器翻译
好的话高分，视情况30-200不等
我还想加一些内容，中文如下。

我酷爱旅行，虽然我很少有机会出去旅行。
我希望有机会能去欧洲旅行，我喜欢那里，
喜欢那里的自然环境，我热爱大自然。

我非常喜欢看纪录片，特别是DC,NG,BBC。
我喜欢看探险，旅游，和美食类的（纪录片）
当然还有科技，动物方面的我也很喜欢。
因为它们可以丰富知识，而且可以练习听力
有机会的话希望和大家一起分享。
Good morning,everybody

My name's ***,You can call me Kevin .

Im honored to have this chance to introduce myself.

It's my first time to introduce myself in English.

I feel a bit nervous and I hope that I can make a good performance today

My favourite subject is english.

But I know my English is not good enough，so I need more practice

I have many hobbies such as hiking,cycling and travelling

In my spare time,I often surf on the Internet and do some sports.

I love travelling,but i haven't got many chances yet.

I hope that I can travel to Europe cuz I like the breathtaking beauty of nature.

I also like to watch documentaries which one made by DC, NG & BBC.

This is it.Thank you so much.Thank you for your attention
中文部分你会翻译吗

Answer 1

我酷爱旅行，虽然我很少有机会出去旅行。
我希望有机会能去欧洲旅行，我喜欢那里，
喜欢那里的自然环境，我热爱大自然。

我非常喜欢看纪录片，特别是DC,NG,BBC。
我喜欢看探险，旅游，和美食类的（纪录片）
当然还有科技，动物方面的我也很喜欢。
因为它们可以丰富知识，而且可以练习听力
有机会的话希望和大家一起分享。

To travel around the world is my great dream,but I have few chanes to do so now.I hope to travel to Europe someday.Its natural surroundings are attractive.
Documentaries,especially those made by DC,NG and BBC,are one of my hobbies.I love watching the documentaries on exploration,travel and cooking,as well as some science and technology and animals,for they can not only enrich my knowledge but also give me chances to practise my listening English.I would like to share them with you one day.

Answer 2

不能用i am honored, 这个的意思是我被誉为……，所以用i am glad 或者 it's my honor to give……第三句以后最好用个介词做开头：firstly, initially,或者 to start my introduction, i'd like to say something about my favourite subject, English. 然后对于兴趣做一些延伸：i am really interested in learning english, because it's such a useful and helpful language. 然后再略作解释 however, my english level isn't that high as i expected, i still need to do more exercise to improve my ability.
i also have some hobbies for outside activites, for instant, XXX XXX
in the spare time , i always surf……sports in order to relax myself.
what;s more, i do love travelling around world. although there were not so many chances for me to have tours, it is my dream that to have a trip in some european countries, to visit beautiful and spontaneous views, to breath the fresh air, and to experience the atmosphere of liberty.

additionally, sometime i choose to watch some documentary……

that's all about what i want to talk about.……

Answer 3

I love travelling very much even though I seldom have chance to make it into practice. If fortunately I got the chance, Europe will by no means become the first choice for its nature environment. I am also interested in documentaries, especially in adventures, tourism and food. Of couse science technology and animals are also included in the aspects I love because it can not only broaden your horizons but improve your listening ability as well. I will share with you if chance is offered.

Answer 4

I love traveling, although I rarely have the opportunity to travel.
我希望有机会能去欧洲旅行，我喜欢那里， I hope to have the opportunity to travel to Europe, I like it,
喜欢那里的自然环境，我热爱大自然。 Love the natural environment, I love nature.

我非常喜欢看纪录片，特别是DC,NG,BBC。 I love watching documentaries, especially DC, NG, BBC.
我喜欢看探险，旅游，和美食类的（纪录片） I like adventure, travel, and food classes (documentary)
当然还有科技，动物方面的我也很喜欢。 Of course, technology, animals, I also like.
因为它们可以丰富知识，而且可以练习听力有机会的话希望和大家一起分享。 Wealth of knowledge as they can, but you can practice hearing the words of hope and opportunity to share with everyone