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急求！！！英语改错！！30分钟内要！！！Today ,Jack and I went to the

急求！！！英语改错！！30分钟内要！！！Today ,Jack and I went to the countryside by the bus for the Strawberry -picking Festival .It starts at 8:00 nin the morning .After the organizer introduced the rules of the festival ,we led into the strawberry garden by some girls .Whine walking along the road ,we saw beautiful flowers and heard the birds sang .The air was much clean than that in the city when yea live .During the festival ,we enjoyed sweet strawberry or watched some exciting performances.At about 5:00 p.m.,we had to say goodbye for the garden .Jack and I enjoyed us and hoped to visit there again .How an unforgivable experience

Answer 1

第一行 去掉by
第二行 starts改成started 8：00后面是in 你可能打错了
第三行 we led into改成 we were led into， 另外 Whine是不是你打错了，应该是While
第四行 The air那句话 改成 The air was much cleaner than that in the city where we lived.
第五行 or改成and
第六行 for改成to， us改成ourselves
第七行 How 改成What

望采纳 谢谢！！

Answer 2

我发现有几处；

1. by the bus改成by bus

2. starts改成started
   

3. nin改成in

4. introduced改成introducing

5. we led改成we were led

6. whine改成while

7. sang 改成singing

8. much clean改成cleaner

9. when yea live改成where you lived

10. or改成and

11. say goodbye for改成say goodbye to

12. enjoyed us改成enjoyed ourselves

13. How改成What
    

Answer 3

*by buses
*8:00am in the morning
*introduced the instruction of the festival
*while walking
*sang as well
去掉when yea live
*and 不是or
*to 不是for
去掉us
*what an unforgivable experience!

Answer 4

starts- started
we led- we were led
whine - while
sang - singing
clean - cleaner
or - and
for the garden - to the garden
enjoyed us - enjoyed ourselves
How - What

Answer 5

与白痴无需多说！