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todayismygrandma'sbrithday.iwokeupearlythanusualthismorning,asweweregoingtoherhousefo...
today is my grandma's brithday. i woke up early than usual this morning ,as we were going to her house for the lunch .she lives with my uncle in the countryside .
before we went to there we decided to buy a birthday cake and some gifts .it took us about an hour get there by bus .Grandma was very pleasedly at our arrival .then we sat dowm and talked a lot with Grandma while my uncle was doing the food he prepared. we chatted for the rest of the days .it was already very later when we got back home .it was a nice visit.
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before we went to there we decided to buy a birthday cake and some gifts .it took us about an hour get there by bus .Grandma was very pleasedly at our arrival .then we sat dowm and talked a lot with Grandma while my uncle was doing the food he prepared. we chatted for the rest of the days .it was already very later when we got back home .it was a nice visit.
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第一段today was my grandma's brithday.because we were going to her house for the lunch .
第二段.it took us about an hour to get there by bus .Grandma was very pleased at our arrival while my uncle was making the food he prepared.it was very later when we got back home .it was a nice visit.
第二段.it took us about an hour to get there by bus .Grandma was very pleased at our arrival while my uncle was making the food he prepared.it was very later when we got back home .it was a nice visit.
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