Question

Hello everybody, my name is XXX English name xxxx

Hello everybody, my name is XXX English name xxxx, I come from XXX, I am a very sunny boy, I usually like reading, my favorite subject is English, I do not like to play basketball, I like to eat fruit, especially like to eat cherries, it is eating, you like to eat it? 这样的自我介绍行不行 初三学生啊！！帮帮忙 英文左右呢

Answer 1

1, Sunny boy听起来有点怪, 你应该说I'm very bright
2, I usually like reading=I like reading
3.应该是I like eating fruits.
4. I like to eat 'fruits', 然后就说epecially cherries就可以了
5, it is eating几乎是多余的, 直接说do you like too?就OK了

追问

你能不能修饰一下 打过来发给我。。我参考。好的我采纳谢谢

抄别人的你可以去吃屎吗 傻仔

你不会就别来回答脑残

智障儿

你吃屎吗

脑残废物

死傻仔

没文化的垃圾

你全家艾滋病 你全家脑中风 你全家不得好死 天打雷劈 出门被车撞死

被狗追九条街 被咬生殖器官垃圾

Answer 2

可以适当加几个连词 and but

追问

你能不能修饰一下 打过来发给我。。我参考。好的我采纳谢谢

Answer 3

Hello Everybody, my name is XXX, and my English name is XXX. I am from XXX and I am very bright. I like reading, my favorite subject is English and I don't like to play basketball. I like to eat fruits, especially cherries, do you like it too?

追问

i am very bright我非常明亮？？