Question

英语问题，高手请进，可大小修改

问题：How much do you enjoy living on campus
答： Yeah，I enjoy living on campus. Bcause the campus' library is big enough and I can use it to increase knowledge.Ofcause,I can meet many people and make friend with them. Because I have very curious heart.I alaways want to know something interest by my friend.Such as "fun place of their hometown""tasyt food"or"interesting story" I prefer share my own fascinating expensive.I think that they will be willing make friends with me. 帮我看看哪里语法还是什么杂七杂八的错误吧，提提修改，有好的句子列子也可以打出来

Answer 1

整体意思表达很清楚，但是有一些小问题

1. how much do you enjoy? 你有多喜欢？回答可以用Very much！用Yeah有些奇怪
   

2. campus' library 这个用法有些奇怪，最好说成 the library in the campus 或者 the library of the campus.

3. increase knowledge 是典型的中式英语 -_-" 正确的说法是broaden my knowledge 

4. 第二行应该是"make friends with them" 要用复数

5. very curious heart 这个太中式英语了，这么表达比较好“My heart/mind is full of curiosities”.

6. "always"写错了，interest是名词，所以应该是"something interesting",  "by my friend" 换成"from my friends"

7. tasty拼错了"tasty food"， fun是名词 "funny places of their hometowns" "interesting stories"应该用复数。

8. "I prefer to share" 不过总觉得这里用prefer意思有些奇怪

9. "my own fascinating expensive" 你想说的应该是experience吧，而且要用复数

10. "be willing make friends" 应该是“be willing to make friends”

句子和句子之间没有衔接和转折，所以读起来觉得很生硬，我修改了一下，写在下面了~~

　　I enjoy living on campus very much.

　　Firstly the library in the campus is very big and I can make full use of it to broaden my knowledge.

　　Secondly, I can meet many people in the campus and make friends with them. Since my heart is full of curiosities, I always want to know something interesting from my friends, such as "funny places of their hometowns", "tasyt food" and "interesting stories".

　　Moreover, I like to share my own fascinating experiences as well, and people are happy to make friend with me! It is good to live with a lot of friends.

　　In one word, the life in the campus is fantastic, I am falling in love with it.