帮忙做一篇英语短文改错。解释一下原因

Asurveyhasbeendonerecentlyaboutthepurposeformiddle1_____schoolstudents'surftheInterne... A survey has been done recently about the purpose for middle 1_____
school students' surf the Internet.According to the survey,only 17 percent 2_____
of the students download materials and 31 percent get information 3_____
from the Internet;when more than 50 percent of the students use the web 4_____
to make friend online,play computer games,listen to music or watch movies.5_____
The survey clear shows that most students use the Internet 6_____
for fun instead for study.In my opinion,it's a waste of time to do 7_____
such things as playing computer games.We should make the better 8_____
use of the Internet by get more useful information from it,which 9_____
will do much good to ourselves in the long run. 10_____
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1、for改成of。of表示“的”,题意为“学生上网的目的”
2、surf改成surfing。ing形式此时作名词用
3、get改成gets。百分数作主语时谓语要用第三人称单数。
4、when改成while。while表示转折。
5、friend改成friends。交朋友,朋友当然不止一个咯。
6、clear改成clearly。副词clearly修饰动词show
7、instead for 改成 instead of 。老师常说的固定搭配。
8、as改成like。意思为“就像”
9、get 改成getting。介词by 之后的动词要加ing。
10. ourselves 改成us。do good to 后面要加宾格的, ourselves 不是宾格的,只是一个反身代词。
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