Question

英语求教

以下文章有10处错误教在哪为什么？万分感谢！
What is the qualities of a good friend ?Trustworthiness is a great quality to look in a friend. But in order have good friends,you have to be a good friend. Are you a good friend ？Do people trust you? Do they tell you their secrets? What do you do their secrets?If you tell A's secrets to B then B would find it hardly to trust you with his secrets B may be thinking, "since you told me about A's secrets youi could be telling somebody other my secrets !" Then A would found out that you haven't keep his secrets and not open his heart to you more. Maybe it's the end of your friendship. So if you want to be a good friend ,you need holding your tongue and zip your lips.

Answer 1

改了一下，不知是否全对，呵呵。
What is(改为are) the qualities of a good friend ?
Trustworthiness is a great quality to look in(改为into) a friend. But in order（加to） have good friends,you have to be a good friend. Are you a good friend ？Do people trust you? Do they tell you their secrets?
What do you do （加for）their secrets?
If you tell A's secrets to B
then B would find it（加is） hardly to trust you with his secrets B may be thinking, "since you told me about A's secrets you could be telling somebody other（改为else） my secrets !"
Then A would found（改为find） out that you haven't keep（改为kept） his secrets and not open his heart to you more.
Maybe it's the end of your friendship.
So if you want to be a good friend ,you need（加to） holding（改为hold） your tongue and zip your lips.