Question

英语短文改错 (共有9处错误）

A young women working at a small pay in a New York office wanted some good copy pearls.While Christmas came and she was giving $25 by her boss, she decided to go to a store and spent all the money with a string of beads. A new ckerk helped her pick out some nice looking pearls. She loved them so much that she often dressed them to work. One day, on the subway ,the string broke but the pearl flew in every direction. The passenrers helped her pick the beads and put them in handkerchief so that she could take them to the shop next day to be restrung. At the jeweler she explained she had bought the string there a couple of days before.

Answer 1

我认为的:
working 改为worked
While Christmas came ,came 改为was coming
spent all the money with ,with改为on

厄,,本人英语能力不大行...只能帮到这里了..
不好意思哈....

Answer 2

A young women(WOMAN) working at a small pay ( PAID OFFICE)in a New York office(删除) wanted some good copy pearls.While Christmas came and she was giving（GIVEN） $25 by her boss, she decided to go to a store and spent（SPEND） all the money with a string of beads. A new ckerk（CLERK） helped her pick out some nice looking pearls. She loved them so much that（AND） she often dressed them to work. One day, on the subway ,the string broke but（WAS BROKEN AND） the pearl flew in every direction. The passenrers helped her pick （PICK UP）the beads and put them in （THE）handkerchief so that she could take them to the shop next day to be restrung. At the jeweler she explained she had bought the string there a couple of days before.

Answer 3

A young women(woman) working(worked) at a small pay in a New York office wanted some good copy pearls.While Christmas came and she was giving(given) $25 by her boss, she decided to go to a store and spent all the money with(on) a string of beads. A new ckerk helped her pick out some nice looking pearls. She loved them so much that she often dressed them to work. One day, on the subway ,the string broke but(and) the pearl(pearls) flew in every direction. The passenrers helped her pick the beads and put them in handkerchief so that she could take them to the shop next day to be restrung. At the jeweler she explained she had bought the string there a couple of days before.

Answer 4

A young women(woman) working at a small pay in a New York office wanted some good copy pearls.While Christmas came and she was giving(given) $25 by her boss, she decided to go to a store and spent all the money with(on) a string of beads. A new ckerk helped her pick out some nice looking pearls. She loved them so much that she often dressed them to work. One day, on(in) the subway ,the string broke but(and) the pearl flew in every direction. The passenrers helped her pick the beads and put them in handkerchief so that she could take them to the shop next day to be restrung. At the jeweler she explained she had bought the string there a couple of days before.

Answer 5

A young (woman ) working(work) at a small pay in a New York office wanted some good copy pearls.While Christmas came and she was giving $25 by her boss, she decided to go to a store and spent all the money with a string of beads. A new ckerk helped her pick out some nice looking pearls. She loved them so much that she often dressed them to work. One day, on the subway ,the string broke but the pearl flew in every direction. The passenrers helped her pick the beads and put them in handkerchief so that she could take them to the shop next day to be restrung. At the jeweler she explained she had bought the string there a couple of days before.