Question

我写了一篇英语作文， 帮我修改一下好吗？ 非常感谢你！

My Father's Hobby
My father has a hobby. He likes running best. In the morning , he always running on his way to work. After working, he runs to home instead of by taxi. He tells me that running can save money and make body much healthier,too. He does believe, lives come from sports. I think of my father's hobby are very helpful and interesting. I'll support him forever.

Answer 1

he likes running most,这样更地道点
he always runs, 不是running
"runs back home"比较好点吧，“跑回家”
"instead of by taxi"语法错误了，应该是"instead of catching a taxi"
"he told me"，因为他告诉我，这是过去的
"he does believe"是一种强调手法，如果不是为了强调，可以把does去掉
"i think my father's hobby is..."不要加“of”，而且是“is”
下面是我根据你，另写的，不是说一定比你好，只是作为另一篇作文参考。
My father has lots of hobbies, but he likes running most. Every morning, he runs to work instead of driving or catching bus. After work(这里的work是名词），he also runs back home. He told me that running can save money and make his body much healthier，and sometimes he also asked me to run with him. He believes, life comes from sports.(不确定这样的语法对不对）i think my dad's hobby is very interesting and helpful. i'll support him forever.

Answer 2

He likes running best应该改为He likes running very much
he is always running on his way to work. 经常做某事 be always doing
he runs home instead of taking taxi、 home前不能用介词
I think of my father's hobby is very helpful and interesting