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Motherboughtmeamcbilephoneformyfifteenbirthday.Ilikedoneverymuch.Oneday,Iwastiyingsen... Mother bought me a mcbile phone for my fifteen birthday.I liked one very much.One day,I was tiying sending a short message with my mobile phone in an English ciass as I suddenly found my English teacher standing in the front of me.She stared at me serious and told me to put it away at once.After class I went to her office and make an apology for her.Then I made a promise which I will never use it in class.She didn't scold me more but told me that it was a shool regulation for students to use mobile phone on the campus.She also wanted that I should keep my promise for ever 展开
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Mother bought me a mobile phone for my (fifteenth) birthday. I liked (it) very much. One day, I was trying sending a short message with my mobile phone in an English ciass (when) I suddenly found my English teacher standing in (去掉the) front of me. She stared at me (seriously) and told me to put it away at once. After class I went to her office and (made) an apology (to) her. Then I made a promise (that) I (would) never use it in class. She didn't scold me more but told me that it was a school regulation for students (加入not) to use mobile phones on the campus. She also wanted that I should keep my promise for ever.

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