Question

翻译翻译英语作文，大神，谢谢啦~~~

我和同学去西山公园玩，在学校门口集合，做公交车去，早上八点出发，八点二十分到达，我们在上午一起划船、放风筝、散步、赏景，有趣极了。我们中午在树下吃饭，下午我们还开了一个party，下午四点回家。我度过了愉快的一天。

Answer 1

One day, I went to Xi Shan park to play with my classmates. We assembled at the gate of school and took a bus there from 8:00 am to 8:20 am. In the morning, we boated, flied kites, walked, enjoyed the view. It was very interesting to do those things with friends. At noon, we had a lunch under a tree. After a party in the afternoon, we went back at 4:00 pm. It was a wonderful day that I spent.

追问

We assembled at the gate of school可以把这句话改为含有meet的吗？

追答

可以。都有碰面的意思。assemble表示集合。meet相对比较简单。但是要注意用它的过去式。

追问

我不会改，你可以帮我改改吗？谢谢

追答

One day, I went to Xi Shan park to play with my classmates. We met at the gate of school and took a bus there from 8:00 am to 8:20 am. In the morning, we boated, flied kites, walked, enjoyed the view. It was very interesting to do those things with friends. At noon, we had a lunch under a tree. After a party in the afternoon, we went back at 4:00 pm. It was a wonderful day that I spent.

Answer 2

I and my classmates go to the west hill park.We get together at the scholl gate.We go there by bus.We go to it at 8:00a.m.,at 8:20 arrive in the park.In the morning,we go rowing,fly kites,have a walk,very interesting.At noon,we have lunch under the tree.In the afternoon,we have a party.At 4:00p.m.,we go home.I have a happy day.

Answer 3

My classmates and I went to the park to play, gather at the school gate, take the bus to, eight morning, arrived at eight twenty in the morning, we go boating, kite flying, walking, enjoy the scenery, very interesting. Under the tree we eat at noon, afternoon we had a party,go home at four in the afternoon. I spent a happy day.

追问

这是拿翻译器弄的吗？

追答

不是拿，是搜的！- -...

追问

有些词我们还没学过，可以再改改吗

追答

scenery 改成view风景（初二人教第三单元重点单词），spend花费句型，其他没有什么太难的！