Question

请大神们帮我看看这段英文有没有什么错误？谢谢

Good morning , boys and girls, ladies and gentlemen, welcome to the XXX primary school. I’m your host XXXX . And I would also like to take this opportunity to wish all present to enjoy his stay in our school and to ahve a wonderful time today.

Now，let’s warmly welcome the XXXXX primary school headmaster Mr. X to make a speech.

Thank you for your speech. This activity is a good opportunity for the everyone to display their ideas on organizing successful classroom teaching. And I hope that you, the audience will enjoy this exciting competition and benefit from what you hear.

Answer 1

在这段 speech 中，你站在学校，代表学校，所以不需要再用冠词 the in welcome to the XXX primary school. just "welcome to XXX primary school."

And I would also like to 中的 And, 也是多余的，不合语法的。因为和前一段话没有关系。

all present 不对；all who are present 是对的，但是又有点儿啰唆。不如说 I wish all of you a pleasant stay and a happy time ...

Now，let’s warmly welcome the XXXXX primary school headmaster, 修改为：Mr. xxx, our schoolmaster; 另外，不能要求客人热烈欢迎；这是不礼貌的。所以，Now, please allow me to give you Mr. xxx, our schoolmaster Now, please allow me to introduce Mr. xxx, our schoolmaster ...

Answer 2

总体不错，有一些小错误，如应该把家长放在前面，有的时候冠词可以去掉。我改了一下，你可以对照来看：Good morning , ladies and gentlemen, Girls and Boys, welcome to XXX primary school. I’m the host of XXXX . And I would like to take this opportunity to wish all present to enjoy your stay in our school and to have a wonderful time today.

Now，let’s warmly welcome Mr. X, xxx primary school headmaster to deliver a speech.

Thank you for your speech. This activity is a good opportunity for everyone to present their ideas on organizing successful classroom teaching. And I hope that you, the audience will enjoy this exciting competition and benefit from what you hear.