Question

英语改错，求帮忙

Dear Lily,
My family and I am really looking forward to your visit.
There are so much things to do here.First of all we'll show you our town.It's quite small so it's easy to find your way around.Maybe we can have picnic in the park.It has a boating lake in where we can row a boat until you like.
Some things are very different in your country.For a start the weather is unchangeable.So you'll need to bring clothes for warm weather or a raincoat just in case it rains.Beside,the roads are always busy.
We hoped that you are going to have a wonderful time with us.Have a safe journey.

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Answer 1

Dear Lily,
My family and I 【am变为are】 really looking forward to your visit.
There are so 【much变为many】 things to 【do变为be done 】here.First of all we'll show you our town.It's quite small so it's easy to find your way around.Maybe we can have【增加a】 picnic in the park.It has a boating lake 【in去掉】 where we can row a boat 【until变为if 】you like.
Some things are very different 【in变为from 】your country.For a start the weather is 【unchangeable变为changeable】.So you'll need to bring clothes for warm weather or a raincoat just in case it rains.【Beside变为Besides】,the roads are always busy.
We【 hoped 变为hope】that you are going to have a wonderful time with us.Have a safe journey.

Answer 2

第一行：am---are ;
第二行： much ---many ;shown--tell
第三行： in where去掉in
第四行：until --if
第五行：different in---different from;unchangeable--changeable
第六行：Beside--Besides
第七行：hoped--hope

Answer 3

I am改为I are
so much改为so many
have picnic 改为 have a picnic
in where改为in which
until 改为if
in your country改为from your country
For 改为from
bring 改为take
we hoped 改为 we hope

Answer 4

Dear Lily,
My family and I am really looking forward to your visit.
There are so MANY things to do here.First of all we'll show you our town.It's quite small so it's easy to find your way around.Maybe we can have picnic in the park.(It has)THERE IS a boating lake in WHICH we can row a boat IF you like.
(Some) Things are very different FROM WHAT'S in your country.For EXAMPLE the weather is VERY (un)changeable.So you'll need to bring clothes for warm weather AND a raincoat just in case it rains.Beside,the roads are always busy.
We hope(d) that you are going to have a wonderful time with us.Have a safe journey.

Answer 5

Dear Lily,
My family and I are[1] really looking forward to your visit.
There are so much things need[2] to do here.First of all we'll show you our town.It's quite small so it's easy to find your way around.Maybe we can have a[3] picnic in the park.There is[4] a boating lake in which[5] we can row a boat if[5] you like.
Some things are very different in our[7] country.For a start the weather is changeable[8].So you'll need to bring clothes for warm weather or a raincoat just in case it rains.Beside,the roads are always busy.
We hope[9] that you can[10] have a wonderful time with us.Have a safe journey.

Answer 6

my family and I am 改my family and I are
much 改many
in where 改where
different in 改different from
you 'll need 改成 you need
最后一句的时态错了。前面用的hoped 后面应该改过去将来时。

额 那几个 first of all,for a start 应该用逗号隔开、不知道算不算错的。
我只找到这么多。