Question

这两句有关于商务英语的表述

教材上有这样一句话：Sometimes, the exporter may （make an offer to） the time of shipment and the mode of payment desired in addition to an exact description of the goods including the quantity, quality, specifications, packing, etc.
我认为括号后边的内容是不是不对啊
然后我在网上查到了另外的一个版本，其他自然段都是一样的，但是这里是这样写的Sometimes, the exporter may （make an offer to） an importer voluntarily. A firm
offer is a promise to sell goods at a stated price. In making
a firm offer, mention should be made of the time of shipment and the mode of
payment（付款方式） desired in addition to an exact description of the goods including
the quantity, quality, specifications, packing, etc.
这两句话的make an offer to后边接的内容完全不一样，我更倾向于下边这个，但是上面的却是教材里的，请教高手给个明示，到底哪个正确呢？谢谢 请各位高手说明一下原因 拜托

Answer 1

前面一句是不是省略了 to 的对象？ 直接接上了offer 的内容？

Answer 2

是！第一句没谓语了呀！把括号拿掉应该就对了。

追问

是 本身其实是没有括号的 我加上括号 是要问问大家括号后边的内容哪个正确