Question

我叫罗晶晶，是一名高一新生，求一篇英语自我介绍。谢谢

在英语课上，老师要求用英语做自我介绍，希望大家能给我支支招，最好是现成的。谢谢啊！

Answer 1

hello everybody,I am very glad to be here to do this presentation,I am luojingjing,a outgoing and easygoing girl,I have many hobby in my idle time,I like wathcing Tv,reading books,and doing some sports . and then,I am very honored to be a member of the class,I hope all of my classmates would be good friends of mine.thank you . 大家好，今天我非常高兴能当众发言，我教罗晶晶，一个外向同时容易相处的女孩，我有非常多的爱好，比如看电视，看书，还有做一些运动，我非常荣幸能成为班上的一员，我希望班上所有的同学能够成为我的好朋友,谢谢。 自己写的，希望满意。

Answer 2

我下面把稻草的文章修改一下文法错误及不妥之处，并作一下改进 Hello everyone，I'm greatly honored（very glad是小学生用的） to be give you a presentation here.（do this presentation给人感觉略有不情愿感 换成give 当然我的建议是不要用presentation这个词 一般做ppt向大家展示才这么用 不过应该没关系 可以先直接说愿意认识大家 和大家成为好朋友 爱好后面说）.I am luojingjing, an(注意冠词)outgoing and easy going girl. （hobbies不要急着说，先表达认识大家意愿）Today（不要用and then，second 这种词 因为这时口语） it's my great pleasure to join this class(honor用了一次这里就换掉吧) and meet you all. I sincerely hope that all of you can be my good friends. In my spare（idle这个词虽然很高级 但是感觉不一样 不推荐） time，I have many hobbies（复数）, such as watching (是这么拼的)TV, reading books and doing all(换成various更好) kinds of sports. I have a very nice family: (three people是废话 不要说)My father is a~~~，and my mother is a~~~ Though they both work hard in there jobs, they always give me a lot of love and care~~ and of course, I also love them.（很好的体现了家庭的温馨） I love animals and there is a cute dog in my home.He/She(这里选一个，随便 但是不要用it) is so nice that he/she has brought a lot of happiness to my home.I think animals are our best friends and I hope that it can become a topic for our communication.Thank you. (好了 结束了 你就这么说就行) trust me 我是新tofel过百的 绝对可靠
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