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阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150左右的英语短文。 With the development of information industry

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150左右的英语短文。 With the development of information industry，our personal information has become more easily exposed in public.As some celebrities are worried about their telephone number，ID number and home address being put on the internet，ordinary people like us can’t escape from the doom either. A recent report from Xinhua reveals over twenty telephone-salespeople have been caught cheating customers by revealing their private information to local community of Beijing. The report says the salespeople would call their potential customers trying to earn their trust by correctly revealing their personal information such as their name，telephone number，home address and even previous purchases. They would then try to persuade the customer to buy a gold cellphone by mail. If the customer became suspicious，they would use another person’s identity to prove their authenticity. [写作内容]你在某英文报刊看到这则报导后，准备就我们学生该如何在网络保护私人信息、以 “How can we keep our personal information off the Internet？”为题目写一篇文章给该报编辑部。 [内容要点包括] 1．以约30词简要概括新闻内容； 2．然后以约120词谈谈你的观点，内容包括： (1)在信息时代，想让个人信息完全与世隔绝是不可能的，但可尽量减少； (2)你为解决信息泄露所采取的一些措施： A．到有安全保障的网站买东西； B．只向能确保你个人信息安全的网站提供个人信息； C．其它一些你认为有效的措施． [写作要求] 1. 可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 [评分标准] 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯

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How can we keep our personal information off the Internet?     As is reported，more and more people are annoyed by strangers because our personal information，such as phone numbers，e-mails and so on，is exposed to the Internet.    It’s almost impossible to keep all personal information off the Internet.  However，we can take some measures to minimize the amount of information we reveal as we travel the Internet. First，shopping online is the ultimate in convenience，but we must make sure that the checkout page on the site is secure.  Secondly，we can only provide information to sites that promise not to share it without our permission and avoid giving permission to share our information with “selected partners”．Besides，we shouldn’t post too much information on social networking sites，message boards and chat rooms.  And chat rooms are meant for sharing.  And if we blog，we should be careful not to reveal too much about ourselves. Obviously，the larger an online presence we have，the more information about us is  going to be online.  An online presence is not necessarily a bad thing，as it can open a whole world of opportunities.

首先文章是关于保护网络隐私的问题，我们的号码，邮箱以及很多私人信息都被暴露在网络之上，需要我们多加注意这方面的问题。但是要想完全与网络隔绝是不可能的，只能尽量注意保护自己的隐私。其次在措施方面，文字提示方面的要点都给出来了，考生只需要翻译即可，注意条理性，要用连接词，如First，second, besides等。同时也要使用高级的句型，倒装句，强调句等让文章更有文采。