Question

求一篇《我最敬佩的人》英语作文，不少于120单词！！

Answer 1

My mother is the person I admire the most because she has the following good qualities. Firstly, she is a tolerant person. She will be tolerant to other people’s mistakes including mine. When I make a mistake, she will let me know why I am wrong and how I am going to do to correct them, rather than simply punish me. Secondly, she is such a talented person who not only has great achievements in her work, but also can cook delicious food for my dad and me. Although she is very busy at her work, she still accompanies me see the film and go to parks on weekends.

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