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假设最近某校就同学们的习惯养成问题展开了讨论。请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇题为 A good h

假设最近某校就同学们的习惯养成问题展开了讨论。请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇题为 A good habit, a successful life 的短文，发表在该校的网站上。字数120左右。 良好的学习习惯 1. 上课注意力集中 2. 充分利用自习时间3. 独立完成作业… 良好的生活习惯 1. 健康的饮食 2. 规律的运动 3. 充足的睡眠… 养成良好的习惯的好处 1. 好习惯对生活有积极地影响 2… 3…(请考生结合自身感受补充两点) A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing.

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One possible version： A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing. We should develop good habits of learning. For example, we should concentrate our attention in class, which will help us better understand what teachers say. Also, we are supposed to make the best of the time for independent study, which can improve our ability to learn by ourselves. Finally, we are encouraged to finish homework alone. At the same time, good habits of living are also good for our life. Healthy eating along with regular exercise is probably the only way to become fit. What is more, a good amount of sleep every night is also important for our health, for it makes us feel energetic and well prepared for the day to come. Good habits have a positive effect on our life. Once a good habit is formed, it will give us power to control ourselves and get rid of bad habits. If we insist on behaving ourselves properly, we are sure to live a successful life.

试题分析：本文要求以A good habit, a successful life为题写一篇短文谈谈关于习惯养成的问题。根据提示可知文章需要包括三个方面信息，一是良好的学习习惯；二是良好的生活习惯；三是良好习惯给人带来的好处。在文章的结构安排上可以用三个段落来分别介绍这些内容。由于每个方面还有很多细节内容，所以在写作时要注意使用恰当的连接词或者过渡词以使段落层次分明，结构清晰，比如firstly、secondly、besides、on the one hand 、on the other hand 等。在语言的组织上要注意使用多种句式结构，以及长短句的交替使用，这样可以形成文章的亮点。此外，根据文章内容可以使用一般现在时。 【亮点说明】本篇书面表达段落清晰，层次分明，语言通顺流畅。在介绍各方面习惯时用到了表示层次关系和递进关系的连接词，比如Also，finally；at the same time ，what is more等，这样有效地使段落更具有层次感，而不会给人杂乱无章的感觉。在句式方面作者使用了并列句、for it makes us feel energetic and well prepared for the day to come.状语从句Once a good habit is formed, If we insist on behaving ourselves properly等，给朴素的语言增加了几分色彩。同时作者在文中使用了很多高级词汇和短语，比如concentrate on , behave oneself , get rid of 等，这些也显示了作者较高的语言水平。