Question

短文改错。 请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改

短文改错。 请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan . I ask my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month late. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle._______________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it . One                                                                1. friends                                                       2.   one   day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan . I ask my father ∧the                                                  3. which                                     4.   asked         5. for money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half                                                                                            6. I myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed                                                           7. 去掉                                         8. when him the money a month late . He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I                               9.    later     10. gave was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.