Question

有没有语法错误？帮忙看这样写合适吗 （英文）谢谢了！

In a word ,three years university education gives me a lot of things to learn ,a lot of chances to try and a lot of practices to improve myself ,though I have made some progress, the road of studying is long, the further study is still urgent for me , in addition, to be a scientist is my dream , for it I will do my best and endeavor forever ,I intend to be a doctor too, if have the chance I hope I can for the much further study to be a postdoctor , I won’t afraid of any difficulties and hardships ,only hope that my life won’t pass away however without anything accomplished and hope I can do something to realize my self-value In my limited life.

Answer 1

不好意思同学 要说大的错误 您真的还不少i 最后 甚至都混乱了、通篇都要改。
我发现你很爱用to 但是英文作文和中文一样 你要是通篇都说 我是一名中学生 我几岁 我爱好什么 我的父母 我的什么什么 那多单调 只能说 只是是有 但是 给人的感觉没到家 你可以试着这样写。
in short,i have learned lots of things in the past 3 years in the college.there are many chances to let me improve my english(也不要一直用lots of)though i have made some progress,the road of studying ahead of me is long,(我发现你主动都要用被动 发出的动作经常搞反 并且有些词不能乱用 urgent是紧急 迫在眉睫的意思 不符合你要表达的意思）你可以这样说the further study is necessary for me ,你觉得呢 necessary更合适吧。in addition being a scientist is my dream,最好用being做主语 那是习惯，to be 总是是不太好的.for it i will try my best 然后endeavor就没必要了。i intend to be a doctor too.好了 现在开始你就一切都混乱了
if i get the chance i hope i can be a postdoctor through my hard working我根据你的意思 重新写的。i won't be afraid of any difficulty.最基本的用法您没注意 afraid是形容词 要用系动词。我很疑惑你最后几句怎么表述出来了 真的一点也不对
only hoping that i won't loaf my precious life time.i really hope i can do something to realise realize my self-value in my limited life.
总体是这样的 继续努力 看样子 你很努力 希望自己英语很好 恩 加油 坚持。多写 多练

Answer 2

典型的中式英语啊