Question

短文改错 One day ,an eight-year-old boy who dreams of

短文改错
One day ,an eight-year-old boy who dreams of going to Brazil went to the airport secret with his passport .He followed afamily with lots of baggages and several children .The plane staff thought he was traveling with his family ,but they let him on .Follow the family ,the boy arrived in Rio and got on the plane .But to their great fear ,the family were out of the sight when they left the airport .The boy went the airport information desk and told the clerk that had happened .At last ,he was sent back home on the very next flight .
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Answer 1

你好，仅供参考。
1、dreams改为dreamed；
2、secret改为secretly；
3、baggages改为baggage；
4、but改为so；
5、Follow改为Following；
6、on改为off（Rio之后）；
7、their改为his；
8、去掉the（out of sight）；
9、went后面加上to；
10、that改为what。

Answer 2

谢谢好评