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Mydreamschoolstarsat8:30a.mandendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtuointh...
My dream school stars at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m.They are three lessons in the morning and tuo in the afternoon.We didn't need to do so many homework.Therefore,we have more time with arter-school activities.For example,we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour everyday.My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom,buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest,sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are king and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
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My dream school stars at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m.They(改There) are three lessons in the morning and tuo(这个是two吧?打错了?) in the afternoon.We didn't(改don't) need to do so many(改much) homework.Therefore,we have more time with(改for) arter(这个又是打错吧after)-school activities.For example,we can do reading for one and a half hour(改hours) and play sport for one hour everyday.My dream school look(改looks) like a big garden.There are all kinds of the(去掉the) flowers and trees around the classroom,buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest,sat(改sitting) by the lake listening (加to)music.The teachers here are king and helpfully(改helpful).They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
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They----There
tuo----two
didn't----don't
many----much
arter----after
hour----hours
sport----sports
everyday----every day
look----looks
the flowers----flowers
classroom,buildings----classroom buildings
sat----sit
listening----listening to
king----kind
helpfully----helpful
单词拼写错误不少
They----There
tuo----two
didn't----don't
many----much
arter----after
hour----hours
sport----sports
everyday----every day
look----looks
the flowers----flowers
classroom,buildings----classroom buildings
sat----sit
listening----listening to
king----kind
helpfully----helpful
单词拼写错误不少
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额,非常感谢您的指导!我啥也不说了,还得继续潜心修炼。。。
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