Question

请英语高人看一下这翻译对不对

1.年轻人有时会抱怨无法和父母沟通。
the teenagers sometimes complain that they can not comunicate with their parents
2.我想他很快会回来，因为他答应和我一起吃饭。
i think that he will come back soon,because he promises he will have a dinner with me
3. 记者敦促发言人就此次军事打击做出解释
the journalist forces annoucer to make a explain about this military affairs
4. 思想是通过语言来表达的。
thoughts are expressed by languages
5.招我们喜欢的不仅是他的聪明，还有他的幽默。
what makes us happy is not just because of his intelligent ,but also his sens of humour
6. 有些年轻人似乎对一切事情都缺乏耐心。
some young people seem to be lack of patience of anything
7.伟人能以人格的力量来控制困难的局面
great people can control hard situation with the power of personality
8.从信封的颜色来看，这封信可能来自一位女性
on the color of the letter,it is possible written by a lady
9.知道原理是一回事，但要付诸实践又是另外一回事
knowing principle is one thing,but putting into practice is another matter
10. 乔治对中国文化着了迷，决定去一所夜校学习中文
George is interested in chinese culture desperately,so he decides to go to a night school forlearning chinese
11. 奢谈的时候已经过去了，我们必须积极行动起来保护我们的环境。
excessively spiel but to take positive action to protect our environment.
12.如果确实在经济上有困难，你可以申请学生贷款。
If you do have difficulty in economy, you can apply for student loans.
13.我今年买的书多得难以数清
It is difficult for me to know how many books I have bought this year.
14.现在我们知道了网络的意义：鼠标一点就知晓天下大事。
Now we know the significance of the network: only by clicking the mouse can we know what is happening around the world.

Answer 1

3中应该用make explanations for表示作出解释~
4 幽默感 Sense of humor
8 从信封的颜色来看用Judging by the color ...较好，可能应用副词probably不应用possible.
10 对是什么着迷用 be fascinated by 更好~
11 The time to speak exaggeratedly is gone,We must take positive action to protect our environment.
楼主翻译的不错啊 继续努力吧~

Answer 2

我想他很快会回来，因为他答应和我一起吃【晚】饭。
i think that he will come back soon,because he promises he will have a 【dinner】 with me

. 记者敦促发言人就此次【军事事件】做出解释
the journalist forces annoucer to make a explain about this military affairs

招我们喜欢的不仅是他的聪明，还有他的幽默【感】。
what makes us happy is not just because of his intelligent ,but also his 【sense】 of humour

有些年轻人似乎对【任何】事情都缺乏耐心。
some young people seem to be lack of patience of anything

伟人能以【个人】的力量来控制【逆境】
great people can control hard situation with the power of personality

现在我们知道了网络的【重要性】：鼠标一点就知晓天下大事。
Now we know the significance of the network: only by clicking the mouse can we know what is happening around the world.

Answer 3

我相信你是对的，实际也一样

Answer 4

对啊