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请英语高手看看 我演讲稿有没有 语法问题……

我非常喜欢听英文歌，今天选择介绍 贾斯汀 为什么介绍他呢 因为他只比我们小一岁 但他已经风靡全球
贾斯汀·比伯是人气正在迅速上升的加拿大少年歌手。贾斯汀·比伯的个人单曲《One Time》一经推出便迅速火爆，第二首单曲《One Less Lonely Girl》首周上榜便空降Billboard Hot 100榜单第16位。他不仅在音乐上有惊人的才华：创作、打鼓、跳舞、弹吉他、弹琴、小号样样行，而且长相很萌很帅气。15岁的贾斯汀·比伯先是在视频网站Youtube上“唱红”了自己，然后被经纪人Scooter Braun发掘，在与天王亚瑟小子（Usher）商量后，Scooter Braun迅速签下了贾斯汀·比伯。现在，他已经是亚瑟小子的“得意门生”了。
中国的粉丝 亲切的称他为 B宝 他的招牌动作的甩头发 他的的 代表作品有baby enie meenie somebody to love） 近期他还演唱了 成龙主演的 功夫梦的主题曲～ never say never

like listening to music very much today i would like to introduce justin as although he is one year younger than us he is world famous

Justin, what is more in canada is rapidly rising young singer. justin, than that of the single one of its time on quickly, the first single "one of the lonely girl less is airborne billboard hot 100 top of the 16th. he is not only in musical talent ： have remarkable creation, drums and dancing and playing guitars, harps and small, and everything looks very first embarked very smart. 15, justin, than the first sites in the video youtube vocalize red music myself and the scooter braun agent for the king arthur and young, after consulting （ usher ） scooter braun quickly sign up more than well, justin. now he has been the pupil's boy ".

Chinese fans kind of him as an asset he signs of head twitches send his representative works there...(baby *enie meenie* somebody to love). if he is the leading actor jackie chan with the work of the theme song never say never

Answer 1

嗯。。看在你写justin bieber的份上我帮你重新写一遍= =
i like to listen to english songs very much. im going to introduce justin bieber today becuase although he is only one year older than i, he has already become one of the most popular singer around the world.
justin bieber is a canadian singer who is gaining his popularity. his song "one time" became popular as soon as it came out.his second song get 16th place on bilboard hot100. he has not only the skill on singing, but also playing guitar, drums, trumpets, piano and dancing. justin has a nice looking. he became popular on you tube than is discovered by Scooter Braun. after the discussion with uusher, Scooter Braun signed a contrast with justin. now justin is usher's favorite student.

Answer 2

你这是自己翻译的还是机器翻译的？ 好乱啊 改就等于要重写一遍了

Answer 3

写的有点……
注意格式哦·

Answer 4

好像有点问题哦，
可以看出你是JB的粉丝。