Question

月考20分英语作文，把第一人称写成了第三人称，错句比较多，扣几分得几分

Answer 1

第一人称: My family I love my family,because I have a happy family. My father is an English teacher.His name is Jacky.He is thirty-eight.He likes playing basketball.And my mother's job is a teacher.My mother is very kind and nice,she is thirty-seven.My mother is always laborious work.I love my parents! 第三人称： My Good Friend Zhang Ying is my good friend.She’s in Class1,Grade4 of Tianjiao Primary School.She’s a model student.She’s clever and she’s helpful,too.She is good at Chinese,maths,and English,She likes painting and drawing.