Question

如何写好英文句子？

Answer 1

1.句子要正确：Do you know where is the People's Park is?(注：从句要用陈述语序，不能用疑问语序。)
2.句子要平行：In my spare time I enjoy listening to populer music and collecting stamps.(注：enjoy 的两个并列的宾语都用动名词。)
3.句子要连贯：After you enter the park by the main gate,walk straight on till you come to a stream.Cross the steam and turn
right.(注:使用after,till,and等过渡词，使句子连贯。)
4.句子要有逻
辑性：I was very interested in computer and won first prize late year.(注：因为后半句的结果“去年获奖”用了过去时，所以前
半句的原因“对电脑感兴趣”也必须用过去时，尽管至今仍非常感兴趣。)
5.句子要避免
过多重复：After walking for a while you'll come to a hill.Walk round to the other side of the hill.There you'll see a lake.
(注：使用不同的句式而避免过多重复“You will”)
6.句子要避免
头重脚轻：The main subjects were Chinese,maths,English,plysics,chemistry and computer.(注：通过主表交换的方法;若真正主语为从句
不定式短语、动名词短语时，可用形式主语it.)

7.句子要避免
汉语式英语：In my spare time, I enjoy swimming---或I'm fond of swimming---或my favourites are swimming---或my hobbies are swim-
ming---(注“业余爱好”不能写成“spare lover”,“lover”是“情人”的意思。)

注意：段落的使用句式要错落有致，不要单调重复。要穿插使用祈使句和I'm sure等主观想象句，再辅以时间状语从句与非谓语动词、长句与短句
的交替使用，使文章更具可读性。