Question

求英语大神解答一下_

if……为他提几点建议

Answer 1

首先：第一句：I heard that you are going cycling this weekend. 

在cycling的用法上，需要明确go doing sth 这个结构一般表示从事户外的体育，娱乐活动

比如：go hunting / swimming / climbing / dancing...

所以cycling前面要加上go。

这样就有两种改法。

1. I heard that  you will go cycling this weekend. 

2. I heard that you are going to go cycling this weekend. 

其次：Here are suggestions for you. 建议改成：Here are some suggestions for you. 

Answer 2

(Dear Ms Lin, I heard that you were going cycling this weekend. Here are suggestions for you. ) First of all, we should observe traffic rules. In our country we must keep to the right side of the road. Especially we should ride on the slow traffic line. Secondly, we must wait in front of the red light. If we cross the street, we must get down our bikes and push them across the street. Last but not the least, we should wear bike helmets when we ride bikes. If you can follow these suggestions, I’m sure you will be safer and happier. 共计85词

追答

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