Question

英语作业帮帮忙！

Answer 1

你的意思是
今天是母亲节。我做了贺卡给我的母亲。首先，我拿来一个卡和彩色铅笔。接着。我在卡片上画图。然后。我用彩色铅笔给图画上色。最后，我写了一首诗在卡上。它完成了。我爱我的母亲，她是一个好母亲。
借这张贺卡我想告诉母亲
她是我心中最好的母亲
对么
下面是正确的文章（和你的文章意思相同）：
Today
is
Mother's
Day.
I
made
a
card
to
my
mother.
First
of
all,
I
used
a
pencil
and
color
cards.
Then.
I
draw
on
the
card.
Then.
I
use
color
pencils
to
color
the
pictures.
Finally,
I
wrote
a
poem
in
the
card.
It
is
complete.
I
love
my
mother,
she
is
a
good
mother.
另外帮你加一句
用不用随你：
I
would
like
to
take
this
card
to
tell
her
mother
she
is
the
mother
of
my
mind
the
best
（借这张贺卡我想告诉母亲
她是我心中最好的母亲）

Answer 2

首先你的I
am
make
a
card
for
my
mother.错了应该是I
am
making
a
card
for
my
mother.其次你的时态错了，应该都用一般现在，不能混用！
加一句：I
am
proud
that
I
have
a
good
mother.