Question

老师要求点评一篇作文请大家进来给给意见，满分30 假设你正在参加全盛英语演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常

翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。
1.认为同学们不必为此苦恼
2.希望能够体谅父母的苦衷
3.建议与父母进行沟通交流
Good morning,ladies and gentleman:
Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries.
In my opinion,students needn’t have to worry about this.Our parents are cloest people in the world.It’s wrong to think that they break our private right if they looked into our school bags or diaries.
We should understand their mood.There are many good dreams in parents’mind,they hope that we could have a good life in the future,they don’t hope their dreams were interruped so they did something to protect us.
For lack of communication with us,they want to know us by another way. I suggeat that we should talk with our parents more often,so that they won’t feel worried and there would be less conflict between us.
Tanks!

Thanks for your listening!

Answer 1

父母只是关心我们。我们应该与我们的父母多讨论，使他们不会感到忧虑，我们之间会有冲突更少.
Pat

Answer 2

这是谁写的 ( ^_^ )不错嘛 应该能的满分 语句也很优美

Answer 3

抛开楼主单词拼写有错误的小失误来看，这会是一篇一等文，有25分或以上的分数。