Question

英语高手帮忙!1分钟英语自我介绍!!急

我学的是播音主持专业,现在要求有1分钟的英语自我介绍.

我是17岁,读高三,在江西景德镇1中,学播音主持,现在考学校说要讲一分钟的自我介绍,关系高考啊~期望有英语高手帮我写一个比较生动的自我介绍.谢谢.

在这里不晓得这句话好不好,好的话帮忙加进去...

在这个冬天,我希望把我最真诚灿烂的笑容带给老师,也希望在以后的每一个冬天,都有机会把微笑带给更多的人.
那个,最好新颖一点,可能我的要求高了点...但希望帮帮忙啊```

拜托拉```

很急...

刚想了一下．

各位老师你们好！我是来自江西景德镇的考生．我同在这里的许多考生一样，怀着对梦想的执着．在今天，我希望把我最真诚灿烂的笑容带给老师，也希望在以后每一个冬天都有机会把微笑带给更多人．虽然我很爱笑，有时却很倔强，不肯服输．可能，现在的我有些缺点，可是我仍然在自己的不完美中寻找完美．希望把我最美丽的一面展现给老师．这就是我，一个单纯向往梦想，并为梦想而努力的女孩．

这样怎么样？够一分钟？

Answer 1

加油，祝你好运先（我也是高三的，刚铩羽而归)
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Today,I'm smiling to you;Tomorrow,I believe that I will be smiling to my audience!
什么中文内容都没有啊，这真是巧妇难为无米之炊啊……总得说点有真实感的吧……自己想说什么，有什么特长，有什么雄心壮志，总得说进去吧……你不说我怎么写呢
一分钟很短的……
Good morning,dear (and respectable) teachers.My name is???I'm a seventeen-year-old senior three student from Jingdezhen No.1 Middle School (in Jiangxi).I'm always smiling-I love that,but I am also a persistent girl who is pursuing her own dreams.Though I still have some shortcomings,I have been trying to improve myself and make myself a perfect (建议用better)person.This is me,a girl who never gives up dreams.
太单薄了点。太大众了点。不过内容上创新是很难的，关键在于你的仪态举止和自信的流露——千万别紧张，卡壳也比如急，笑笑说excuse me就行了。
请教英语老师一般是最安全的。

Answer 2

I'm ~~ , I am twenty years old now. As my friends said, I'm a boy who are openness and sunshine. I'd like to make friends with others.If I have chance, I want to make friends with some foreigners,as I'm not good at English, so I think they can help me to improve my speaking English. On the other hand, I like listening music, playing basketball, watching movie and so on. Finally, I'm glad to meet you!

HELLO everyone,my name is XXX a 17years'old young lady/boy who has big family membership.There are many ralitiviees in my family,such as my mother ,grandparents and aslo my ancle and anut.All of them love me very much, meanwhile I often show my love to them,too.I aslo love many hobbies.I am keen on play basketball as well as play computer.I am aslo an extrovert liking make a lot of friends.You can judge from my shining smlie .In addition, i hope i can do a good job to bring laughters to all of you!That's all for my presentation,Thank you.

下面的文章改一下就可以了,这是六级水平。
Good afternoon (morning), professors：
It is my great pleasure to be here. My name is xxx , I study in xxx.I like music very much.There are three people in my family. During my two-year study in the university as an under-graduate student, I have built up a solid foundation of professional knowledge, as well as a rich experience of social activities. I am a determined person, always willing to achieve higher goals.
What's more, I am good at analysis, with a strong sense of cooperation. All of these led me to the success of passing the first round of the entrance examination to the Master's degree. Personally, I am very humorous and easy-going, enjoying a good relationship among my classmates.
In my spare time, I like to read books regarding how to be myself and how to deal with problems. Music and movies are my favorite entertainments. As for my sport interest, I could not deny my greatest interest is football. Playing this game brings me a lot of glory, happiness and passion.
All in all, Wuhan University, with a highly qualified faculty and strong academic environment is the university I have long admired. I believe that I am a very qualified applicant for admission into your Master of IT program and can contribute to the enrichment or diversity of your university.
THANK YOU FOR YOUR ATTENTION！
我是初中生,学的很少,找了一下,希望有帮助
建议尽量保持笑容,以轻松的语气演讲,祝你成功哦~