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Inautumnof1985,whenIwasayoungman,IwastravelinginthenorthofIndia.Anevening,afterhuntin...
In autumn of 1985,when I was a young man,I was traveling in the north of India.An evening,after hunt in the forest all day,I was returning to the place that I had put up my tent.It was getting dark,but I was walking along a road.Suddenly I saw two eye glaring at me from among the trees.What can I do?Should I jump into the river to save my live?Then I looked at the right.In the river there had a big crocodile waiting to welcome me with its mouth was wide open.
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In (加入the) autumn of 1985, when I was a young man, I was traveling in the north of India. (One) evening, after (hunting) in the forest all day, I was returning to the place (where) I had put up my tent. It was getting dark, (and) I was walking along a road. Suddenly I saw two eye glaring at me from (between) the trees. What (could) I do? Should I jump into the river to save my life? Then I looked (to) the right. In the river there (was) a big crocodile waiting to welcome me with its mouth (去掉was) wide open.
另：save my live是不是save my life的错打？
In (加入the) autumn of 1985, when I was a young man, I was traveling in the north of India. (One) evening, after (hunting) in the forest all day, I was returning to the place (where) I had put up my tent. It was getting dark, (and) I was walking along a road. Suddenly I saw two eye glaring at me from (between) the trees. What (could) I do? Should I jump into the river to save my life? Then I looked (to) the right. In the river there (was) a big crocodile waiting to welcome me with its mouth (去掉was) wide open.
另：save my live是不是save my life的错打？
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