谁能帮我改改这篇英语作文?主要是写童年时印象最深的一件事，急用，谢谢啦！ 10
AchildhoodmemoryIcaughtaheavycoldwhenIwasthreeyearsold;mymumwasveryscaredbecausemyfat...
A childhood memory
I caught a heavy cold when I was three years old; my mum was very scared because my father was not at home. she didn’t know how to do. She hugged me and took me to the hospital. On the way to see the doctor, we came across a shop,there were so many candies on the counter，in order to reduce my pain after eating some medicine. My mum bought two peanut candies to me. The candies were so sweet that I forgot I was ill. The next day, my mum couldn’t find me anywhere; she was so worried and asked other friends to find me. The day began to dark, and there was still no message about me. At the end ,my mum remembered the shop she bought candies to me ,so she hurried went to the shop and saw me scrunch into the corner, the shop owner told my mum ,I came to his shop very early, he asked me what I wanted and who were my parents ,but I didn't speak anything. I just stared at the peanut candies all day. After hearing that, my mum hugged me tight and burst into tears.
Money was very valuable at that age, though we were down and out, my mum gave me a dime everyday, I would took it bought peanut candies by myself and as good as gold all day.
When I was a senior student in high school, I had a big stress about college entrance examination. The anxiety was full of my heart. I felt very lonely. At this time, my mum came to school and gave me a meal. Before she left, she sent me a gift, I opened it carefully, and it was peanut candies! I didn’t eat it more than ten years. I suddenly realized that I was not alone; my families were always standing by my side. The peanut candies included the love of my parents!
Now, when I feel low or have some difficult, as long as I think the peanut candies, I will be full of encourage! 展开
I caught a heavy cold when I was three years old; my mum was very scared because my father was not at home. she didn’t know how to do. She hugged me and took me to the hospital. On the way to see the doctor, we came across a shop,there were so many candies on the counter，in order to reduce my pain after eating some medicine. My mum bought two peanut candies to me. The candies were so sweet that I forgot I was ill. The next day, my mum couldn’t find me anywhere; she was so worried and asked other friends to find me. The day began to dark, and there was still no message about me. At the end ,my mum remembered the shop she bought candies to me ,so she hurried went to the shop and saw me scrunch into the corner, the shop owner told my mum ,I came to his shop very early, he asked me what I wanted and who were my parents ,but I didn't speak anything. I just stared at the peanut candies all day. After hearing that, my mum hugged me tight and burst into tears.
Money was very valuable at that age, though we were down and out, my mum gave me a dime everyday, I would took it bought peanut candies by myself and as good as gold all day.
When I was a senior student in high school, I had a big stress about college entrance examination. The anxiety was full of my heart. I felt very lonely. At this time, my mum came to school and gave me a meal. Before she left, she sent me a gift, I opened it carefully, and it was peanut candies! I didn’t eat it more than ten years. I suddenly realized that I was not alone; my families were always standing by my side. The peanut candies included the love of my parents!
Now, when I feel low or have some difficult, as long as I think the peanut candies, I will be full of encourage! 展开
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自己写的 强 就这样就可以了 不用追求玩完美了~~
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