Question

高中英语改错题,大家帮帮忙

单句改错,每句有一处错误
1.Hope you great success in your work!
2.All you can do is encouraging him ,show him understangding and offer him advice.
3.In Friday afternoon some students took part in a speech activity.
4.In few weeks the story was returned to her
5.It was very fine when I got up early on last Sunday morning
6.I rushed out the house as quickly as I could
短文改错，共有10处错误
Dear Mrs.Winthorp，
So my first week at college is over ! No lectures this morning so I think I'd email you and let you know what things are going .
I'm glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor .There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so they we can help each other on the course work.Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here.
Well ,I had better to stop now. I'm going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon,for I've got some preparation to make ,Keep in touch.

Answer 1

1.Hope（这里改成Wish，表祝愿） you great success in your work!
2.All you can do is encouraging him, show（这里加ing） him understanding and offer him advice.
3.In（这里改成On） Friday afternoon some students took part in a speech activity.
4.In （这里加a） few weeks the story was returned to her
5.It was very fine when I got up early on（这里删掉on） last Sunday morning
6.I rushed out （这里加上of） the house as quickly as I could

Dear Mrs.Winthorp，
So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so I think I'd（这里改成I'll） email you and let you know what（这里改成how） things are going .
I'm glad to say that anything（改成everything) has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find（改成found) me a comfortable one on （加上the） second floor. There are two girls from my course here and I plan（改成am planning）to make friend（这里加上s） with them so they we can help each other on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly（这里删掉ly） here.
Well, I had better to（这里删掉to） stop now. I'm going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon, for I've got some preparation（这里加上s） to make，keep in touch.

Answer 2

1.May you great success in your work!
2.All you can do is to encourage him ,show him understangding and offer him advice.
3.On friday afternoon some students took part in a speech activity.
4.In few weeks ago the story was returned to her
5.It was very fine when I had got up early on last Sunday morning
6.I rushed out the house as quickly as I can.