Question

机器翻译绕道，求英语达人大神帮忙翻译一下全文，请人工翻译，非常谢谢

Once you held my hands, you separated my way from the world (my way got changed),
In your arms i got to know a new world。
The lump in my throat (that had been holding back the tears) dissolved by you(and the tears began to flow) and my cry turned into a silent poem。
Once you held my hands , the moment (second) stopped counting (time stopped),
The moments of dying (aching) for you taught me how to live,
With you i returned to the world (to life) , to the beginning of both of us,
I had abandoned myself (to despair), with you i returned to tomorrow (future)... to tomorrow.
Tell (me) without you where would be my place in this world，
Tell (me) (without you) who would i lean on to help me with my tears，
As for me, without you i would have nothing to do neither with the world nor with myself!(i wouldn't care about anything)，
Once you held my hands , the moment (second) stopped counting (time stopped)，
The moments of dying (aching) for you taught me how to live，
With you i returned to the world, to the beginning of both of us。
Once you held my hands my way got changed，
‎Once you held my hands , the moment stopped counting，
In your arms i got to know a new world。
【恳求大神翻译的通顺点像样点，请正确不要偏题，非常感谢】
【如果是机器翻译的就不要献丑了，特别感谢】
【语句要通顺，不要从翻译器里直接粘贴复制下来的，跪求了】

Answer 1

Once you held myhands, you separated my way from the world (my way got changed),
一旦你牵着我的手，你就从世界分开了我的路（我的路变化了）

In your arms i got to know a new world。在你的拥抱里我开始了解一个新的世界。
The lump in my throat (that had been holding back the tears) dissolved byyou(and the tears began to flow) and my cry turned into a silent poem。
我喉咙里的肿块（它曾经阻挡泪水回去）被你溶解了（泪水开始涌出），还有我的哭声变成了无声的诗。
Once you held my hands , the moment (second) stopped counting (time stopped),
一旦牵过着我的手，这一时刻（秒）世界停止了运转（时间停止了）
The moments of dying (aching) for you taught me how to live,
在为你死去这一时刻教会我怎样生活。
With you i returned to the world (to life) , to the beginning of both of us,
和你一起，我回到了这个世界，回到了我们的开始
I had abandoned myself (to despair), with you i returned to tomorrow(future)... to tomorrow.
我曾经抛弃了我自己(不顾一切的)，和你一起我回到明天。。。。，明天
Tell (me) without you where would be my place in this world，
告诉我，没有你这个世界上哪里是我眷恋的地方。
Tell (me) (without you) who would i lean on to help me with my tears，
告诉我，（没有你）谁会让我依偎，去帮我擦去我的眼泪。
As for me, without you i would have nothing to do neither with the world norwith myself!(i wouldn't care about anything)，
为了我，没有你我即和这个世界也我自己世界毫无关系（我不会在乎其它任何事）。
Once you held my hands , the moment (second) stopped counting (time stopped)，
一旦你牵着我的手，这一时刻时钟停止运转。
The moments of dying (aching) for you taught me how to live，
在为你死去的这一时刻，教会我怎样生活。
With you i returned to the world, to the beginning of both of us。
和你一起我回到这个世界，回到了我们俩的开始。
Once you held my hands my way got changed，
一旦你牵着我的手，我的路开始变了。
‎Once you held myhands , the moment stopped counting，
一旦你牵着我的手，这一时刻时钟停止运转
In your arms i got to know a new world。
在你的拥抱中我开始了解一个新的世界。

Answer 2

一旦你握住我的手,你便把我从原来的世界分离了，
在你的怀抱里我认识了一个新的世界。
我的喉咙里像堵住了什么东西，融化了你,我的哭泣变成了无声的诗。
一旦你握住我的手,那一刻时间停止了运转,
死亡的时刻来临,是你教会我如何存活,
你和我一起回去吧，开始我们的新生活。
我已经放弃了自己，你和我一起去遥远的未来吧
请你不要告诉我原来在这个世界生活的地方，
请你不要告诉我谁会用眼泪让我学会帮助,
至于我,没有你我就会认为自己与世界无关,
一旦你握住我的手,那一刻时间停止了运转,
死亡的时刻来临,是你教会我如何存活,
让我们一起回到这个世界,让我们重新开始。
一旦你握住我的手，我便被你改变了，,
‎一旦你握住我的手,那一刻时间停止了运转,
在你的怀抱里我认识了一个新的世界。

Answer 3

1分都不给，只有机翻了

追问

怎么可能呢，最低10分