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请把下面的自荐信翻译成英语,谢谢 急!!

尊敬的领导： 您好！ 我是上海电机学院2009届，机械制造与自动化专业的毕业生，在纵跨学校与社会门栏之际，仰慕贵单位重视人才，重视知识之名，冒昧叩扰，希望能得到您的赏识。 当今，大学生都在注重自身素质的提高，在大学生活中，我一直朝这一目标积极进取，努力奋斗，并造就了自己很强的独立和适应能力。 大学三年期间，我认真学习专业课程，取得了优异的成绩。另外，还注重工作与学习的相结合，参加了学校各种社团活动。 在校期间我还利用业余时间学习了许多计算机知识， WORD、AUTOCAD、PHOTOSHOP、UGNX及电脑组装等等，并且还具有一定电脑专业英语的能力。虽然谈不上精通,可也算的上会。 “为者常成，行者常至”，我虽学有所成，但仍需磨练和机遇。我将用自己的实力去寻求属于自己的天空，使自己的才能得到更好的发挥。怀着一份诚挚的心情，我勇敢地向贵单位推荐自己，一次合作的机会，对我来说是一个良好的开端。我相信凭着我完整的知识结构和较宽的知识面，定能与贵公司携手并进，共创美好未来。 感谢您在百忙之中给予我的关注。望贵单位能接收我，支持我，让我加入你们的大家庭，我将尽我最大的能力为贵单位发挥我应有的水平和才能。 此致 敬礼！

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自己翻译的，感觉还比较正确，呵呵。 Distinguished leadership: Hello! I'm the 2009 session graduate of the Shanghai Institute of Electrical ,and my major is mechanical manufacturing and automation . At the time from college to society,I admire that your organization attaches much importance to the talents and knowledge, venturing to call interference and looking forward to get your appreciation. Nowadays, the college students all focus on improving the quality of themselves.During my life at the university, I have been always positive towards this goal, working hard and bring up good independence and adaptability. During the three years of university , I earnestly studyed my professional courses and achieved excellent results. In addition, I also focued on combining the work and waht I learned , participating in a variety of community activities in the college.While studying at the school, I spent a lot of my spare time to learn computer knowledge, WORD, AUTOCAD, PHOTOSHOP, UGNX and computer assembly, and so on, and I also had a computer professional English, not very proficient though. "To those who often into, unless to regular" . Although I have some achieving, I still need to hone and opportunities. I will find some sky on my own ao so to make my talents play better. With a sincere heart, I recommended myself to your organization . One co-operation opportunity is a good start for me. I believe I will be able to go hand in hand with your company for a better future ,with my whole knowledge structure and a wide range of knowledge. Thank you for giving attention to me on your busy schedule. I look forward to your organization's acceptance and supports, allowing me to join your big family, and I will do my best to play for your organization . Stop here. Salute!