Question

英语语法高手请进·！！

If there is no the effort of people, we won’t have this glorious performance.
这句话有几处错误?请改正，并说明原因·！！

Answer 1

错误点：
（1）全句应该用虚拟语气，因为这是对“既成事实”的否定假设（实际上已经无法改变），不是一般的（对未来事情）的前提性假设（还有改变的可能）。
（2）no和the不能连用，因为no等价于not a，其中a和the都是冠词（article），因此no后面的the就多余。
（3）people这个词太笼统，似乎可以改成everyone。当然不改people的话似乎也说得通，就是理解起来比较别扭，改成everyone后更明确。

全句的意思是：如果没有大家的（一起）努力，我们不会取得如此骄人的成绩（或业绩）。

建议改成：
If there were no effort of everyone, we would not have this/so glorious performance.

Answer 2

If there were not the effort of people, we wouldn't have had this glorious performance.
从句虚拟语气，和现在事实相反，用were。
no错误，no后只能接名词，没能带定冠词the，去掉the就对。
主句 wouldn't have had 为情态动词+完成时，表示本没但做到了的意思。
people完全没错。
这就是正解，望采纳。

Answer 3

首先，整个句子应该是虚拟，是对现在的虚拟，条件句中动词用过去时/be动词变为 were，主句用情态动词+动词原形。意为“假如没有人类的努力，我们就不会有这光辉的业绩”

if there were no the effort of people,we would not have this glorious performance.

glorious performance 这种说法是有的 bowing out after a glorious performance 功成身退

Answer 4

If it is not the effort of the people, we won't have a brilliant performance like this.

1。performance的搭配，可以：brilliant, convincing, dazzling, electrifying, excellent, fine, flawless, good, great, impressive, inspired, outstanding, polished, remarkable, sparkling, spirited, strong, superb, wonderful 。不要用brilliant，brilliant多指idea类的。
2。前面半句no the说不通，可以说if there is not the effort of the people,也可以按我刚才的改正说，用强调句型。
3。people前面加个定冠词，表示人民。

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