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Dear Sir,
I am a student in the school; Iknow the school website in English need some improvement in recent days. Now Ihave some ideas that may help you to improve the website. Firstly add morepictures about the school life; it will demonstrate our life rich and colorful.Moreover, please update frequently that may attract more students to view thewebsite. Lastly I hope the website have reading salon, and may provide a booklist for us. i hope these suggestion may help you.
Best Regards
Li Hua
Dear Sir,
I am a student in the school; Iknow the school website in English need some improvement in recent days. Now Ihave some ideas that may help you to improve the website. Firstly add morepictures about the school life; it will demonstrate our life rich and colorful.Moreover, please update frequently that may attract more students to view thewebsite. Lastly I hope the website have reading salon, and may provide a booklist for us. i hope these suggestion may help you.
Best Regards
Li Hua
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