Question

短文改错，老师留啦一道题，英语短文改错。谢谢帮忙啦。。。

具体内容：（不须分大小写）
dear friend,
when we learned over the radio that the autonomous perfecture of yu shu hit by a terrible earthquake on the april 14th ,2010,killed more than 2000 people ,we became very worried . it is said that many houses were ruined, so you couldn`thave improved by now.
as for youself ,don`t give in hope and be strong-mined when facing the great diffculties because of people all over the country is standing by you . and please keep in touch with me and i will try my best to help you .beside,the government is trying to help the people in the disaster-hit areas rebuild their home . i believe the day will soon come that you overcome all the diffculties and live the new life .
hope to get your early reply.
yours,
li ming

Answer 1

When we learned over the radio that the Autonomous Prefecture of Yushu（此处加 was，应该用被动语态，看介词by） hit by a terrible earthquake on the (去掉，习惯用法。此处不用冠词 )April 14th，2010，killed（改为killing,现在分词做结果状语） more than2，000 people，we became very worried.It is said that many houses were ruined，so you couldn't have your classes as usually（改为usual，as usual 像通常那样）.I wonder if things have improve（改为improved，现在完成时） by now.
As for yourself,don't give in（改为up,give in 屈服让步，不及物动词短语；give up 放弃） hope and be strongminded when facing the great difficult（改为difficulty，形容词great应修饰名词） because of people all over the country is（改为are，主语是people） standing by you.And please keep in touch with me and I will try my best to help you.Beside（改为Besides,副词，此外，而且）,the government is trying to
help the people in the disaster-hit areas rebuild their home.I believe the day will soon come that you overcome all the difficultes and live the（改为 a .live a ...life过着...的生活） new life.
Hope to get your early reply.

Answer 2

改正在括号处标出！一共十处错误！

dear friend,
when we learned over the radio that the autonomous perfecture of yu shu (加入was) hit by a terrible earthquake on (取得the) april 14th, 2010, (killing) more than 2000 people, we became very worried. it is said that many houses were ruined, so you couldn't have improved by now.
as for yourself, don't give (up) hope and be strong-minded when facing the great diffculties because (去掉of) people all over the country (are) standing by you. and please keep in touch with me and i will try my best to help you. (besides), the government is trying to help the people in the disaster-hit areas rebuild their (homes). i believe the day will soon come (when) you overcome all the diffculties and live (a) new life.
hope to get your early reply.
yours,
li ming

Answer 3

亲爱的朋友，
当从收音机里听到玉树市在2010年4月14日发生地震时，我们很担心，这次地震使2000多人丧生。据说很多房屋被破坏了，你现在肯定还没从悲伤中恢复过来。
你自己不要放弃梦想，要坚强的面对困难，因为全世界的人们在支持着你们。要与我保持联系，我会尽我所能的帮助你的。除此之外，政府正在帮助受难地区人们重建家园。我相信不久你就能克服困难，拥有一个全新的生活。
愿早日收到你的回信
你的朋友
李明

Answer 4

不会

Answer 5

我现在写的就是这道 可是 我是来查答案的