Question

求一篇托福作文，主题是“学生应不应该在上学期间去做兼职”，用上图中的词汇，谢谢！

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Answer 1

　　It is popular among university students to do part-time job. Is this behavior good or bad? Some people think it brings many advantages to the students, while there are another people consider that part-time job is not worth the candle. As far as I am concern, every coin has two sides. There are several reasons can support my point.
　　On the one hand, doing part-time job can earn some money, make more new friends and get some working experience. Though doing a part-time job after school can earn little money, that little money can reduce students’ family burden or let them have enough money to spend to enjoy more their college life. In addition, doing part-time job in different places can contact with different people, which is sure to make more new friends. Moreover, students can get some working experience from their part-time job, which will not from school course teaching. This experience is good for their career after graduation.
On the other hand, part- time job will take up students’ time and not good for forming teamwork spirit. Everyone’s energy is limit. If students let part-time job to share their time, their study time will be reduced. As a result, it will affect their study. And if students go out to do part-time job once they have time, there will be less and less time for them to communicate with their classmates. It is bad for students to form teamwork spirit.
　　To sum, doing parttime job has pros and cons. Every student should consider their own situation to choose whether to do parttime job or not. If they can make everything in balance, dong part-time job is acceptable.