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neilchang621
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As the saying goes, chance favors the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my experiences.

I was not chosen as a member of the volleyball team of our school. Beacuse of this, I decided to give up playing volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me and pointed out that it was my laziness and poor perparation which led to my failure.

After that, I practiced playing volleyball every day.(去掉 on) When another tryout arrived, I was fully prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected and became an improtant player on our school team.

From this, I am firmly convinced that we are able to seize the chance as long as we get well prepared.

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chance改为chances
favoured改为favour
as后加a
play改为playing
but改为and
which改为that
on every去掉on
full改为fully
convincing改为convinced
I改为we
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X啊a
2017-04-11
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这是什么卷子啊
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