Question

改正一下这个英语句子

Answer 1

（源自洛阳大华雅思题库）常用实用生活英语口语，中国人常说错的20句英语 中国人常说错的20句英语 1. 我很喜欢。 错误：I very like it 正确：I like it very much. 2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 错误：The price is very suitable for me. 正确：The price is right. Note：suitable (合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ 错误：What’s your job? 正确：Are you working at the moment? Note：what’s your job这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in? 顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书。

Answer 2

原句及意思：
By their self-enterprise, colleges not only earn own tuition, but also develop practical abilities.
通过自主创业，大学不仅能挣自己的学费，还能培养实践能力。

存在问题分析：
1、从学费（tuition)来看，赚取“学费”的主语应该是“人”而不是“学院”，此为逻辑错误,应改为 college students；
2、own一词的特点是：“某人自己的......"是 “one's own......", 所以，此处应该加上one's, 应加上their.
改正后的句子是：
By their self-enterprise, college students not only earn their own tuition, but also develop practical abilities.

Answer 3

By their self-enterprise, colleges not only earn own tuition, but also develop practical abilities.
通过自主创业，大学不仅能挣自己的学费，还能培养实践能力。

tuition:学费，earn tuition 应该是学生的行为，而不是college的行为
own一词的特点是：“某人自己的......"是 “one's own......", 所以，此处应该加上one's, 应加上their.
所以这个句子应改为：
By their self-enterprise, college students not only earn their own tuition, but also develop practical abilities.