英语作文：When I grow up 当我长大了
作为一名老师，我经常遇到孩子写英文作文时，难的抓耳挠腮，写英语作文其实很简单，只要掌握以下几个技巧
1、要句子通畅，也就是要让人一眼就看出来你要写什么
2、要有出彩的语句，这个完全是靠你平常的积累，北大出版的作文不是不行，只是你还没有用好，你可以挑一些简单一点你认为好的语句背下来，以后作文可以拼几句上去
3、要有适当的从句，什么what从句，什么where从句，还有什么as、if从句，能写的多些几句，总能得高分的
例文:1
When I grow up
When I grow up, I want to be an artist. I want to use my colorful pencil to draw this wonderful world to everyone.
Some years ago, I did not know how to use the pencil to draw the picture for my mother and my father. One day, I found I could draw animals, people, mountains, seasons with the colorful pencils with teacher’s help. As a result, I want to be a artist. Even though this dream is very small, but I still make my effort. I can study drawing hardly from now on. An then I think my dream will come true.
参考译文
当我长大了。
当我长大后，我想成为一名艺术家。我想用我的彩色铅笔画这个美妙的世界每个人。
几年前，我不知道如何用铅笔画我的母亲和我的父亲。有一天，我发现我可以画动物，人，山，四季用老师的帮助的彩色铅笔。作为一个结果，我想成为一个艺术家。虽然这个梦想很小，但我仍然努力。从现在开始我就可以学习画画了。然后我想我的梦想会实现。
例文2
The new year is coming, it means that I am older, I am not the little girl any more, I must make something different from the old me. Before, I was so lazy to do the housework, when my mother asked me to do it, I would make some excuses and then ran away. Now I need to learn to take some responsibility, I should share the housework and relieve my mother’s burden. The new year gives me the new task, I must learn to broaden my vision and gain the knowledge, so that I can make some progress. I am so happy that I am older and grow up, I want to become mature and let my parents be proud of me.
参考译文
新的一年到来了，这意味着我老了一点，我不再是个小女孩，我必须比以前的我有所作为。以前，我很懒于做家务，当妈妈叫我去做的时候，我会找一些借口，然后逃跑。如今我需要学着去担当责任，我应该分享家务，减轻妈妈的负担。新的一年给予我新的任务，我必须开阔眼界，增长知识，这样才能有所进步。我很高兴我变的年长了，也长大了，我想要变得成熟，让父母为我骄傲。
例3
The years in a hurry, time flies, the blink,remember not long ago I was a little doll, ahlearn language, suddenly became a fourthgrader, haven't I linger on, such as goodchildhood went away from me.Childhoodbarbie dolls, my joy, jingle doraemon, there arepiles of bricks and fairy tale books, morebecome permanent memory. Now I grow up,long and my mother is almost high, and Ibecome more sensible, don't need mom toworry about homework every day,you willfinish it on time. Will also help my mother dosome housework within our capabilities.Remember when I was in kindergarten, everyday morning, my mother helped me to wearclothes, grandmother hello l eat breakfast, dadsend me to school. Looking back now reallyhappy dead, as SHE sang (I don't want to growup)... Really a little don't want to grow up,grow up, you worry too much, when I see mymother to work overtime at night come back,the in the mind is really have a kind ofunspeakable taste, really want to help her.Grow sour, sweet, make me confident, havethe goal, I now the most important thing is
study hard, with good grades in return formother and all the people who care abouthelp.
参考翻译：
岁月匆匆，时光飞逝，似白驹过隙，记得不久前我还是一个伊呀学语的小娃娃，转眼就成了四年级的小学生了，还没等我细细品尝，美好的童年时光就离我而去了。儿时的芭比娃娃，有我的欢乐，叮当机器猫，还有成堆的积木，童话故事书，多成了永久的回忆。现在我长大了，长的和妈妈差不多高了，我变得更加懂事，每天的作业都用不着妈妈操心，自己会按时完成。还会帮妈妈做一些力所能及的家务事。。记得我还在上幼儿园的时候，每天早上起来，妈妈帮我穿衣服，奶奶喂我吃早饭，爸爸送我去上学。现在回想起来真是幸福死了，就像SHE唱的那样（我不想长大)。真有点不想长大，长大了，烦恼多了，每当看到妈妈加班晚上回来，心里真是有一种说不出的‘滋味，真想帮她一把。成长的酸酸甜甜使我自信，有了目标，我现在最重要的是努力学习，以良好的成绩来回报妈妈和所有关心帮助的人。
When I grow up, I want to be an artist. I want to use my colorful pencil to draw this wonderful world to everyone. Some years ago, I did not know how to use the pencil to draw the picture for my mother and my father. One day, I found I could draw animals, people, mountains, seasons with the colorful pencils with teacher’s help. As a result, I want to be a artist. Even though this dream is very small, but I still make my effort. I can study drawing hardly from now on. An then I think my dream will come true.
当我长大了，我想成为一个艺术家。我想用我的彩色铅笔画这个美妙的世界，每个人。几年前，我不知道如何使用铅笔为我母亲和我父亲的画。有一天，我发现我可以画动物，人，山，在老师的帮助下彩色铅笔的季节。因此，我想成为一个艺术家。尽管这个梦想很小，但我还是让我的努力。我可以画不从现在开始学习。然后我想我的梦想会成真。
As a child, I often daydreamed about what I wanted to be when I grew up. I would imagine myself as an astronaut exploring the limitless reaches of space, a doctor saving lives in the operating room, or even a superhero with incredible powers.
As I’ve grown older, my aspirations have changed but my sense of wonder and curiosity has remained. Now, I am faced with the challenge of deciding what I want to do for the rest of my life.
One thing I know for sure is that I want to make a positive impact on the world. I believe that everyone has a duty to give back, whether it’s through volunteer work, charity donations, or simply spreading kindness wherever you go.
When it comes to choosing a career path, I have several options in mind. Working in the field of education, either as a teacher or administrator, appeals to me because of the potential to shape young minds and help them reach their full potential. I am also interested in pursuing a career in public service, possibly working for a government agency or environmental organization.
Of course, there are many challenges that come with these types of careers. Long hours, low pay, and high stress levels are often par for the course. However, I am willing to make sacrifices in order to pursue work that is meaningful and fulfilling.
In addition to my career goals, I also have personal aspirations that I hope to achieve one day. Traveling the world, learning a second language fluently, and becoming proficient in a musical instrument are just a few items on my bucket list.
While I may not know exactly what the future holds, I am excited to see where life takes me. With hard work, determination, and a willingness to take risks, I am confident that I can achieve my dreams and make a positive impact on the world around me.
