Question

大学英语四六级考试写作题型分析及范文(3)

Answer 1

[范文]

changes in people‘s diet

as can be seen in the table， there have been great changes in people‘s diet in the past five years. grain used to be the chinese main food， but now it is playing a less important role in peoples diet， while the consumption of some highenergy foods， such as milk and meat， has increased steadily.

　　what caused these changes? i think the reasons are as follows: first,the open policy brings the people opportunities to earn a lot of money.second,people nowadays pay more attention to the structure of their diet.they are seeking the most reasonable diet structure, which will do good to their health.

from the above， we can see that，with the development of the country，the level of the chinese people‘s life has changed in the past five years.i’m sure there will be greater changes in the future.

文中第一句话就明确告诉读者这篇作文是一篇图表作文。接下来根据图表分析了在过去的五年中人们的饮食结构都发生了哪些变化，最后预测将来人们的生活水平还会发生更大的变化。尽管在这张图表中有很多数据，但作者并没有过多地引用这些数据，而是通过数据把要说明的问题点了出来。

[例2]directions： for this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 100 words on income sources between chinese and american students.study the following table carefully and your composition must be based on the in formation given in the table. write three paragraphs to：

　　1. describe the differences of the income sources between chinese and american students.
　　2. analyze possible reasons for these differences.
　　3. predicate future tendency.

[范文]

　　income sources between chinese students and american students
　　income sources of chinese students are quite different from those of american students. in china, students get 90% of their money from their parents while in america, only 50% of students` money is provided by parents. in addition, chinese students earn only 5% of their money from part time jobs and 5% from fellowship or scholarship while income from these two resources for american students takes up 35% and 15% respectively of their total income.

i think there are probably three reasons for their differences. first， because of the influence of different social and family values，chinese students have formed the habit of asking for money from their parents while american students have developed more sense of being financially independent. second， most chinese parents devote too much care to their children and they would rather save up to afford their childrens education rather than encourage them to take parttime jobs.but in america， many parents pay more attention to developing the students ability of selfreliance，so they encourage their children to find parttime job to earn some money by themselves. third， since america is more developed than china，it is relatively easy for students to find parttime jobs.in china，such opportunities are rather rare.

i believe with the development of china， more and more chinese students will realize and pay more attention to the necessity of selfdependence. in addition， more and more opportunities will be provided for them to take parttime jobs. so more students will go out of the ivory tower to broaden their knowledge and to become the master of their own lives.

作者在这篇图表作文中很好地利用了图表以及题目中所给的提示，文章结构完整，意思表达清楚，较好地完成了一篇图表作文所应该表达的内容。

第五节命题作文

命题作文要求就所给的作文题目进行写作。与其他作文相比，命题作文具有较大的自主性。因为同样的一个题目可以从不同的角度、用不同的文体来进行写作。例如“my teacher”这个题目可以写成一篇记叙文，也可以写成一篇描写文。不管用什么文体，也不管从哪个方面来写，只要写出的文章切题、流畅、条理清楚、语言正确就是一篇好文章。然而，这种较大的自主性也会使考生感到困难。因为在有限的30分钟之内，要形成提纲，并写成短文并不是件易事。这就要求考生在写命题作文时首先一定要审好题，要仔细分析题意，搞清楚题目所涉及的范围，确定文章的中心思想，切忌跑题。再者，要选择正确的文体。最后，要围绕文章的中心思想，将写作素材进行分析、归类并写好写作提纲，包括：引言句、主题句和结尾句。