Question

英语短文改错，好心人帮下忙，高分悬赏！

My classmate,Li Lei,hasawarded the title of"Star Student ofthe Week"for which he did for our class.In the hot afternoon of last Saturday,he went downtown and walk from onestore to another.He wanted to look for the costumes when we would wear in the singing contest.While the rest of us was enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms,he spent the whole afternoon searching and rejecting.Finally,he found the right clothes.Deeply moving by his efforts,we tried our best and won the first prize.He is always warm-hearted or cares a lot about theclass.Besides,he often devotes his spare time to help others.He deserves the honor and we should learn him.

Answer 1

改正在括号处标出！共十处错误！

My classmate, Li Lei, has (加入been) awarded the title of"Star Student of the Week" for (what) he did for our class. (On) the hot afternoon of last Saturday, he went downtown and (walked) from one store to another. He wanted to look for the costumes (which/that) we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us (were) enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, he spent the whole afternoon searching and rejecting. Finally, he found the right clothes. Deeply (moved) by his efforts, we tried our best and won the first prize. He is always warm-hearted (and) cares a lot about the class. Besides, he often devotes his spare time to (helping) others. He deserves the honor and we should learn (加入from) him.

Answer 2

My classmate,Li Lei,has awarded the title of"Star Student of the Week"for what he did for our class he went downtown and walked from onestore to another.He wanted to look for customers when we would wear in the singing contest.While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms,he spent the whole afternoon searching and rejecting.Finally,he found the right clothes.Deeply moved by his efforts,we tried our best and won the first prize.He is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about theclass.he often devotes his spare time to helping others.He deserves the honor and we should learn from him

Answer 3

1.On the hot afternoon of last Saturday
你几年级 晕啊啊啊 最明显是这个

只能帮你这些了
看明白意思了但不知词组有没有错的
看来我词汇量还是不够
知识还不够广
对不起 我只能帮你这些 I an so sorry!

Answer 4

My classmate,Li Lei,was awarded the title of"Star Student ofthe Week"for what he had done for our class. On the hot afternoon last Saturday,he went downtown and walked from one store to another,looking for the costumes what we would wear in the singing contest.While the rest of us was enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, he spent the whole afternoon searching and choosing.Finally,he found the right clothes.Deeply moved by his efforts,we tried our best and won the first prize.He is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class. Therefore,he often devotes his spare time to help others.He deserves the honor and we should look up him and follow him.
自己翻的

Answer 5

你真厉害，我正搜呢